This my entry for Colleen Chesebro of The Fairy Whisper Tuesday Tanka.
The words we have to use snynomymosly are Grow and Honour .
With Geoff at Tangental being full of weddings old and new, Colleen’s prompt put me in mind of my wedding day. I hope this is what my Dad felt as he gave me away.
A FOB Tanka.
Heart swelling with pride
All grown up and amazing
A beautiful bride
Proud to walk her down ailse
She’s blossomed look at her smile.
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A FOB Senryu
As a child blossoms
To watch was your privilege
Your heart fit to burst.
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:18:12
OK, Willow… what’s “FOB?” I would say your last poem is a Senryu because it is more about a personal event. I always think of Haiku as related to nature or change. I think you captured those precious moments you shared with your father very well, indeed. Gorgeous pictures! ❤
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:38:10
FOB is ‘father of the bride ‘ as opposed to FOG ‘father of the groom’ You are right the poem is not a Haiku, I shall change it to a Senryu. I am glad you like the photos they are from 1971!! 💜💜
Apr 03, 2018 @ 20:40:51
LOL! I feel so silly… I don’t think I ever heard it abbreviated. LOL! I still double check the difference between a Haiku and Senryu. ❤
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:44:09
Don’t feel silly it may not an Americanisum. 💜😀
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:45:11
❤ ❤ ❤
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:21:27
lovely
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:21:37
Lovely memory 🙂
Apr 03, 2018 @ 20:10:13
This is lovely sis and the photos are priceless!
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:47:11
Me and my beautiful dad, dress made by one of my clever sisters 💜💜💜. I am glad you like the poems.💜
Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:55:11
💜💜
Apr 03, 2018 @ 22:53:15
What great pictures and memories. Loved the poetry too willowdot.
Apr 04, 2018 @ 06:06:19
It was a long time ago but still fresh in my mind. I hope my Dad was proud of me, I think he was. 💜
Apr 04, 2018 @ 14:53:33
What gorgeous photos and poems, Sis. I bet your dad was as proud as could be, and you looked gorgeous. 🙂
Apr 04, 2018 @ 16:47:04
Thank you Judy, I hope he was , it such a long time ago, I forgot how handsome he was.💜💜
Apr 05, 2018 @ 06:55:19
He was indeed, sis 🙂
Apr 05, 2018 @ 09:38:39
💜
Apr 04, 2018 @ 18:36:07
These are both lovely and beautiful pictures too, Willow.
Apr 04, 2018 @ 18:44:00
I do hope my Dad was proud of me. Thank you for reading and liking Robbie 💜🌹🤗💜
Apr 04, 2018 @ 21:40:05
That’s supposed to read “these”, not the, lol! 😆
Apr 04, 2018 @ 21:52:48
💜🤣🤣
Apr 04, 2018 @ 22:38:56
Beautiful bride! I enjoyed seeing the, Willow. 💞💞💞
Apr 04, 2018 @ 21:53:12
It was so long ago 💜😉
Apr 04, 2018 @ 22:10:53
The years fly by…. 😱
Apr 04, 2018 @ 22:16:59
Oh! indeed they do 💜
Apr 09, 2018 @ 12:12:49
How lovely, Willow 🙂
Apr 09, 2018 @ 14:10:39
Memories in black and white 💜
Apr 09, 2018 @ 16:14:52
I’m not sure the colour ever fades on such memories 😉 xx
Apr 09, 2018 @ 14:22:08
You are so right, all the little things are as clear as yesterday.💜
Apr 09, 2018 @ 14:33:33
Yes, I too remeber those little details 😉 x
Apr 09, 2018 @ 15:42:54
They are so important 💜
Apr 09, 2018 @ 18:07:11
They are indeed 🙂 x