Florescence Day Two.

Day two of the Florescence, courtesy of its creator, Jane Dougherty.

Image from Pixabay

Ink black sky wild star flies

Gold sparks, sly night hawk cries.

I try to count stars, lost in a blink

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Apr 03, 2018 @ 05:37:22

    Beautiful Sis ๐ŸŒŸ

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  2. Jane Dougherty
    Apr 03, 2018 @ 08:03:46

    It is beautiful! I have to say though, you are about as good at following rules as I am! You don’t need an internal rhyme, it’s just that the end rhyme of the first two lines (ie the sixth syllable) also rhymes with the sixth syllable of the last line which is of nine syllables, so it’s an internal rhyme only in the third line, the last word of which rhymes with the first one of the poem.

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  3. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Apr 03, 2018 @ 12:51:06

    Wistful..lovely, Willow

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  4. JT Twissel
    Apr 03, 2018 @ 17:30:19

    I really like this one – nicely done.

    Reply

  5. Lynz Real Cooking
    Apr 03, 2018 @ 19:21:58

    Love this one

    Reply

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