Florette: The Phone.

05 Mar 2018 27 Comments

by willowdot21 in Poems Tags: Florette, Phone, sadness

The phone rings, a sad song

Life stings, it is all wrong.

27 Comments (+add yours?)

bwcarey
Mar 05, 2018 @ 10:19:31

Moscow calling, those were the days, timely. Now we can’t put our mobiles down in case we miss something; what is it they sow in human heads.

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- willowdot21
  Mar 05, 2018 @ 10:24:04
  
  Yes that is the point, but sadly it’s too late now we are all hooked! Worst drug ever!! 💜💜
  
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  - bwcarey
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 10:38:23
    
    a friend of mine was living a very haunted life, she loses her phone for a week, and is all pleasant, no phone, time to do things. thanks for the comments, blessings
  - willowdot21
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:28:19
    
    Blessings to you too💜
leegschrift
Mar 05, 2018 @ 10:32:03

Not for me! I care about my poetry!

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- willowdot21
  Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:30:40
  
  Sorry not sure what you mean , you don’t like the Florette form, you don’t like my poetry or you don’t like the phone 😀?
  
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  - leegschrift
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 12:45:59
    
    So many questions. I phone you later. haha
  - willowdot21
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:46:40
    
    Hi ho ho okay 😀💜
Ritu
Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:38:39

So good!!

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- willowdot21
  Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:39:49
  
  Thanks Ritu I am beginning to enjoy theses Florettes xxxx
  
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  - Ritu
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 11:53:12
    
    🤓 I can see!
  - willowdot21
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 12:10:03
    
    🙃🤔🌹
thelonelyauthorblog
Mar 05, 2018 @ 12:32:11

Well done

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- willowdot21
  Mar 05, 2018 @ 13:41:19
  
  Thanks 🌹
  
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John W. Howell
Mar 05, 2018 @ 19:30:01

Loved it.

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- willowdot21
  Mar 05, 2018 @ 20:03:50
  
  Thank you John 💜🌹
  
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Lynz Real Cooking
Mar 05, 2018 @ 21:30:45

Wonderful!

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Betty Hayes Albright
Mar 05, 2018 @ 23:23:43

This made me think of the phone call bearing bad news (which I see now isn’t what it was about). Another great florette, Willow. 🙂🌸💕

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- willowdot21
  Mar 06, 2018 @ 06:22:49
  
  It can be interpreted any way you like, it did start off as exactly that, bad news then it seemed to morph. Hope you are well and happy Betty 💜
  
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  - Betty Hayes Albright
    Mar 07, 2018 @ 02:15:31
    
    Thanks, Willow. Ups and downs, trying to be positive. Hope you’re doing as well as possible. I know the difficulties. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. ❤️❤️❤️
  - willowdot21
    Mar 07, 2018 @ 06:10:06
    
    Life is all up and downs all we can do is hope for more ups and maybe Spring will bring something better.💜
robbiesinspiration
Mar 06, 2018 @ 03:56:38

These poems are very impactful.

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- willowdot21
  Mar 06, 2018 @ 06:08:07
  
  I think because the are only two lines of six syllables they need to be condensed , punchy, to the point. I do like the disapline.🌹💜
  
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  - robbiesinspiration
    Mar 06, 2018 @ 17:24:05
    
    Yes, I must try this.
  - willowdot21
    Mar 06, 2018 @ 18:01:59
    
    Oh! Do I think you will like it.💜
Anacrazyfuturewriter
May 16, 2018 @ 15:52:28

Wow extremely relatable! Great job putting that sentiment into beautiful poetic language!

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- willowdot21
  May 16, 2018 @ 16:51:41
  
  Thank you I do love poetry 💜
  
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