Simple Elfje 11 Word Challenge #1 August 19th 2017: Prompt: ‘love’

 If I have understood the Challenge this is an eleven word Elfie. The prompt word is love. 

 The elfje format, 11 words, 5 lines in the following order  1,2,3,4,1.

Row Words Content

Love

It hurts 

All around us

I speak the truth

Pain.

(11 words)

The Challenge comes from Mick E Talbot Poems

Rules and Pingback Here

                   

36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Judy E Martin
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 13:26:36

    Well done Sis. This looks a hard challenge, but as always, you have nailed it!! 🙂

    Reply

  2. Mr. Militant Negro
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 13:52:22

    Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.

    Reply

  3. Tess
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 13:59:12

    The style of the poem reminded me of Haiku, a Japanese style of poetry written about the Seasons

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Aug 19, 2017 @ 21:27:36

      I do a lot of Haiku, they are three line poems in the form of three lines. The first and last line having five syllables the middle line having seven syllables. Making 17 syllables. The Tanka is similar but has two extra lines with seven syllables in each.

      Reply

  4. Lynz Real Cooking
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 16:00:02

    Strong and sad

    Reply

  5. Ritu
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 16:42:28

    That was well done sis.

    Reply

  6. robbiesinspiration
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 19:43:01

    Very good, Willow.

    Reply

  7. micketalbot
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 22:20:17

    perhaps,
    because I’m
    romantic, I think
    of love pain, as
    rapture.

    pain
    of unrequited
    love truly hurts,
    cheated on being the
    worse.

    Loved yours!

    Your pingback link took me to the challenge page but didn’t show there? Mine didn’t either? Help…

    Reply

  8. Trackback: A Simple Elfje 11 Word Challenge #2 August 27th 2017: Prompt: ‘happy’ – Mick E Talbot Poems

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