Turn round

Sipralling out of control

This life will swallow me whole.

I really am lost , no hope

Washed up lost can’t cope.
Each day presents challenges new

Puzzles and mazes to work my through.

Yet I can’t give up, I can give in

I shall just carry on, push up and win.


19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jun 23, 2017 @ 16:26:31

    😍😍😍 oh sis. What’s up? Xxx


  2. Betty Hayes Albright
    Jun 23, 2017 @ 21:15:38

    Sounds like you had one of those days! Hope you have a good night and a much better tomorrow. I can certainly relate! Will send you positive thoughts. πŸ’“β€οΈπŸ’–πŸ’•


  3. gigoid
    Jun 23, 2017 @ 23:01:06

    Hmm… Life does go on, doesn’t it? Still, I think, personally, looking at that sunset photo might sort it as easily…
    Be well, milady; it’s all part of the whole….
    xoxo & love


  4. Judy E Martin
    Jun 24, 2017 @ 12:53:33

    Keep strong, Sis. There is always a glimmer of light… xxx


  5. zumpoems
    Jun 24, 2017 @ 14:16:33

    Nicely done. Minor type – I am guessing you mean maze.


  6. JT Twissel
    Jun 26, 2017 @ 18:12:00

    Oh dear. Yes, turn around and carry on. Hope things lighten for you.


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