Sue Vincent of Daily Echo said : Use the image below to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose, by noon (GMT) Wednesday 8th February and link back to Sue’s post here at her blog,with a pingback. Please make sure that the pingback works and if not, copy and paste your link into the comments section of of Sue’s post here .
Her Last Low Tide : A Nonet.
It had taken all day to get here.
That they would be late was her fear.
They made it as the last rays
From the sun touched the sands
Of the last low tide
They stood wide eyed
Hugged and smiled
Happy she
Died.
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Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:19:42
Beautifully sad x
Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:26:33
Thank you Ritu I am pleased with it , a calm ending ❤
Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:37:17
It was Indeed ❤
Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:44:59
<3, I think if we can we should all pick our own endings so many do not get that privilege! xxxx
Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:28:28
A calm ending indeed. Beautifully done.
Feb 02, 2017 @ 15:29:57
Thank you Sue I think if we can we should all be allowed to choose our exit, so often we have no choice. xxxxx
Feb 02, 2017 @ 16:17:55
There are times when we need to remember that we do have a choice about how we face death, even though we may have nno choice about its time or its manner. xx
Feb 02, 2017 @ 17:53:42
I know Sue I have had to witness some not so good deaths in my family and friends circle. I do hope I can be strong enough to do better. I have done my best but so far to not much avail ( in helping others) …I don’t seem to be explaining myself very well , sorry.
Feb 02, 2017 @ 17:57:47
It’s okay, Willow, I’ve known some hard deaths too.
Feb 02, 2017 @ 17:58:42
Thank you Sue I won’t waffle on now ❤
Feb 02, 2017 @ 18:29:49
Waffle as much as you like, Willow 🙂 ❤
Feb 02, 2017 @ 18:31:04
Thank you Sue one day maybe not tonight though! I am grateful too. xxxxx
Feb 02, 2017 @ 18:54:05
❤ xxx
Feb 02, 2017 @ 18:55:06
💝💖💗💟
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:00:35
a piece offering peace.
A welcomed stillness well portrayed
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:43:43
🙂 a soft and gentle ending!
Feb 02, 2017 @ 23:06:08
❤ ❤ So-o sad. ❤
Feb 11, 2017 @ 22:21:24
ys but happy too , a releasexxxx
Feb 03, 2017 @ 01:45:37
Nicely done dear Willow, sad ending but I thought you built nicely to it..
Feb 03, 2017 @ 06:19:18
Thanks Michael , sad yes but chosen xx
Feb 03, 2017 @ 14:02:16
Very nice, Willow – a surprise ending that fits perfectly!
Feb 03, 2017 @ 14:07:57
Thank you a peaceful ending I hope. xxx
Feb 03, 2017 @ 16:41:02
Peaceful and right!
Feb 03, 2017 @ 17:02:01
Yes indeed! ❤
Feb 03, 2017 @ 14:37:55
Lovely xx
Feb 03, 2017 @ 14:44:47
❤
Feb 07, 2017 @ 04:46:10
This is an ending one can hope for and cherish 🙂 Lovely!
Feb 07, 2017 @ 06:59:07
Yes I hope we all can choose xxx
Feb 09, 2017 @ 13:37:33
happy death in such a short time…..wow, very poignant and intensely emotional, yet impersonal in a way…fabulous
Feb 09, 2017 @ 16:09:28
Thank you, having seen so many of my friends and family die in sad circumstance I wish we all could die well………. A big wish I know . Thank you for reading xxxx
Feb 09, 2017 @ 14:01:55
It is a calm ending. I wish it could be like that for everyone.
Feb 09, 2017 @ 16:06:28
OH! so do I
Feb 28, 2017 @ 00:38:49
Beautiful and evocative!
Feb 28, 2017 @ 07:00:25
Thank you 💗