Vampire Sadness : A Nonet

He was  her constant companion

Draining  her life’s blood more each day

Friends, family  pushed  slowly  away

Lost was she from the  first

Crook of his finger

She became his

Instantly

No more

Free

 

 

26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 16:51:21

    Instantly, indeed.

    Reply

  2. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 17:07:04

    Fascinating. 😀 ❤

    Reply

  3. jan
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 18:29:34

    Nicely done – I always love the images you use.

    Reply

  4. Tosha Michelle
    Nov 15, 2016 @ 19:30:20

    Love both the visual images and the one your words painted

    Reply

  5. Judy E Martin
    Nov 16, 2016 @ 18:15:03

    I enjoyed this, Willow xx

    Reply

  6. Genie
    Nov 16, 2016 @ 20:25:54

    “Eyes wide shut.”
    I like the way you called it: Vampire Sadness
    Your poem reminds me of a song, it’s a catchy tune so it takes a bit to understand that the theme is about love that is actually a form of control by the other person, just like in your poem.

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Nov 16, 2016 @ 21:16:25

      Just looked it up, the JLS song, yes I see the similarities!

      Reply

      • Genie
        Nov 16, 2016 @ 21:27:35

        Willow, you are much more sharp and quick than me, it took me over a year to see that in the song; but when I did, I no longer had my eyes shot out of my head and my heart ripped from my chest! 😉

      • willowdot21
        Nov 16, 2016 @ 21:31:21

        I have had experience of this kind of relationship, so I recognise it. It sounds like you have too. We need to keep our eyes open ! xxxx

  7. Lynz Real Cooking
    Nov 16, 2016 @ 20:41:35

    Wow Willow! Very different and nice

    Reply

  8. willowdot21
    Nov 16, 2016 @ 21:04:28

    Thank Genie I am going to listen to this one xxxx

    Reply

  9. Vikas Acharya
    Nov 26, 2016 @ 04:54:15

    Reblogged this on Journal Edge.

    Reply

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