Stream of Consciousness Saturday: Acrostic Hopelessness.

This  is part of  LindaGHill‘s Stream of Consciousness Saturday  . This  week  Linda said : Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is: “ho.” Find a word with the two letters–“ho”–in that order, and use it in your post. Enjoy!

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Acrostic Hopelessness .

Hope left with not even a goodbye

Off  she  went  regardless of my  cry

Ever ready  to  surround  me

Loneliness  grabbed me so I could not  flee

Eager  to entrap me in it’s hold

Sinister  horror  surrounds  me whole

Slipping ever  further  from reality

Never knowing  if  ever again I will be free

Endless  questions  beset  my mind

Smothering me with hopelessness unkind

Sinking  deep into  the abyss, lost alone death  would be bliss.

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27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Judy Martin
    Oct 22, 2016 @ 17:49:17

    You’ve done it again Willow!! This is so powerful and emotional – I can feel the despair!🙂

    Reply

  2. Lynz Real Cooking
    Oct 22, 2016 @ 18:11:59

    So much power in this and I can feel it deeply x

    Reply

  3. Ritu
    Oct 22, 2016 @ 18:21:03

    Very powerful Willow!

    Reply

  4. gigoid
    Oct 22, 2016 @ 23:30:03

    Some dark corners in there, milady. Don’t hang out in them too long, without taking light with you…

    *smile*

    gigoid

    Reply

  5. Mother Willow
    Oct 23, 2016 @ 00:38:27

    Great poem, lots of challenges, you seem to be doing well now.

    Reply

  6. jacquelineobyikocha
    Oct 23, 2016 @ 09:54:49

    May we never sink into such state of hopelessness. This is so profound

    Reply

  7. jan
    Oct 23, 2016 @ 16:06:55

    Sad theme but a lovely job. And I love the photo – perfect for the theme.

    Reply

  8. Brenda Davis Harsham
    Oct 23, 2016 @ 17:55:23

    I can relate to these lines. I feel bad for poor P whose place is past.

    Reply

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