Thursday photo prompt – Violet sky #writephoto
Tinged with violet
Gold rays of the new born day
Beautiful yet bleak.
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Ava opened her eyes and looked to the horizon, her bones ached , sleeping in the car was not good for anyone. The view that greeted her lifted her spirits. The dawn was creeping in from the horizon. Violet in hue , gold tinged it gave the road and the tree line a magical feel.
Rubbing her eyes Ava promised herself she would never,ever sleep in the car again. Taking a moment she stepped out of the car and stretched, the sky was hypnotic it called her and she was too tired to argue . Moving round the car she stood and breathed in the raw morning air as she drank in the dawn sky.
Thinking of home she had the urge to get back to James and his comfy bed and hot lips. She turned back to the car only to be frozen in the lights of the huge lorry. She had no where to go the truck took her off the road and threw her back down with a thud before flattening the life out of her.
Looking down at her battered and bashed body Ava thought what a shame she would not taste James again…………… she turned and walked up into the violet sky towards the golden opening.
The truck driver felt the bang, he had not seen her but he was so shocked to find her under his wheels. He looked up into the violet and golden dawn, he thought he could see something in the clouds, just for a second. He looked at the sky and then pulled out his phone and dialed 999 knowing as he did it was already too late.
Oct 21, 2016 @ 19:55:54
Haunting, Willow!
Oct 21, 2016 @ 22:02:43
Thanks Ritu… Do we need to vote
Oct 22, 2016 @ 06:42:50
Yes please Hun!
Oct 22, 2016 @ 06:51:14
All done😋
Oct 22, 2016 @ 07:00:25
😍
Oct 22, 2016 @ 00:06:10
This is the best you’ve ever done. Awesome. Especially the narrative. ❤ ❤ <3.
Oct 22, 2016 @ 06:00:24
Thanks Tess , I enjoyed writing it. xxx
Oct 22, 2016 @ 13:30:17
You are welcome, Willow. 🙂
Oct 22, 2016 @ 15:21:17
😍😗
Oct 22, 2016 @ 06:09:47
Oh dear! That is chilling!
Oct 22, 2016 @ 06:16:46
That’s the idea like the dawn,chilling. 😉
Oct 22, 2016 @ 13:45:36
Love the story from both sides. A nice little read, which sent a tingle up my spine, Willow.
Oct 22, 2016 @ 15:19:02
Thanks Hugh, I just felt the poor lorry driver deserved a mention, after all it wasn’t his fault.
Oct 22, 2016 @ 16:09:23
This was a great story for the prompt Willow 🙂
Oct 22, 2016 @ 16:33:20
Thanks Judy I do try 😊
Oct 22, 2016 @ 16:49:33
You always deliver, Willow 🙂
Oct 22, 2016 @ 17:13:32
Thanks Judy it is so nice to get words like that from you 😊
Oct 25, 2016 @ 20:52:11
That’s a poignant tale, Willow..and beautifully told.
Oct 25, 2016 @ 21:02:07
Thanks Sue!