Cinquain: His Eyes

His eyes 

Blue like deep pools 

Beguiling, and tempting 

Huge open windows of the soul, 

I see.


Explanation and examples of a beautiful cinquain by Silver Threading here

Image from Scarlett Skillet here do visit her blog .

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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Morgan
    Jul 15, 2016 @ 13:51:56

    Those eyes are so Beautiful!

    Reply

  2. gigoid
    Jul 15, 2016 @ 15:01:38

    Hmm… Nice poem, for sure, but, to me, his eyes look just a little vacant…. not too much going on in there, I think….

    *grin* But, I am a guy, so, maybe it’s different for women….

    gigoid

    Reply

  3. Lynz Real Cooking
    Jul 15, 2016 @ 18:42:29

    nice one!

    Reply

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