Closing time : Nonet

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Closing was  the  best time at the bar

She had  time  to  think , sip her drink

Watch the smoke from her cigar

No more suggestive winks

Silence cloaks her whole

Tired of  watching

The lost soul

Swallowed

Whole

 

 

 

 

 

11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jan
    Jun 18, 2016 @ 19:01:25

    Nice one! Love the picture too.

    Reply

  2. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Jun 18, 2016 @ 20:01:44

    Love the picture. Kind of lonely sitting at the bar alone unless she’s the one closing up and taking a load off with a drink. 😀 😀 😀

    Reply

  3. Paul
    Jun 18, 2016 @ 21:36:32

    Well said Willow. Hey I saw you on the blogger’s video.You are young looking – since you had grown children,I expected someone older. Looking Good!

    Reply

  4. Lynz Real Cooking
    Jun 19, 2016 @ 00:38:09

    Gorgeous!

    Reply

  5. thecontemporaryedition
    Jun 21, 2016 @ 13:31:01

    I really liked this. Beautifully written!!

    Reply

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