RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #84 Milk&Smooth

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Light shed night and day

All along the milky way

Passage light and smooth.

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i-b-young-love-bYoung love all so new

He loved  to call her milky

Her touch was so smooth

 

 

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Feb 15, 2016 @ 19:54:51

    Oh dear me.. I am sassy today. Love your haiku, they speak to such delightful imagery. (sassy side bar) When I was a youngster, we had a local “celebrity”, Milky, The Twin Pines (milk) Magic Clown! So when I read, :He called her milky… yeah, it always tastes better when it comes back out through the nose, 🙂

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  2. Lynz Real Cooking
    Feb 15, 2016 @ 19:56:41

    Pretty and lovely

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  3. zumpoems
    Feb 16, 2016 @ 12:18:46

    Really like the connection between the two stanzas in the re use of the original material.. Well done!

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  4. vronlacroix
    Feb 20, 2016 @ 18:02:25

    Both so lovely. Milky way is especially original.

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  6. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Feb 23, 2016 @ 02:45:34

    Both haiku are good but I loved the first one. The images are great too.

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