15 Feb 2016 12 Comments
in Uncategorized Tags: love, milky, RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #84 Milk&Smooth, smooth, Stars
Light shed night and day
All along the milky way
Passage light and smooth.
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Young love all so new
He loved to call her milky
Her touch was so smooth
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Feb 15, 2016 @ 19:54:51
Oh dear me.. I am sassy today. Love your haiku, they speak to such delightful imagery. (sassy side bar) When I was a youngster, we had a local “celebrity”, Milky, The Twin Pines (milk) Magic Clown! So when I read, :He called her milky… yeah, it always tastes better when it comes back out through the nose, 🙂
Feb 15, 2016 @ 20:14:06
😦 he he he. 🙂
Feb 15, 2016 @ 19:56:41
Pretty and lovely
Feb 15, 2016 @ 20:12:52
Thanks 🙂
Feb 15, 2016 @ 20:25:33
So pretty willow!
Feb 16, 2016 @ 12:18:46
Really like the connection between the two stanzas in the re use of the original material.. Well done!
Feb 16, 2016 @ 13:03:17
Thanks I am still learning with the Haiku but I really like the! Thanks for reading.
Feb 20, 2016 @ 18:02:25
Both so lovely. Milky way is especially original.
Feb 20, 2016 @ 18:10:31
Thank you so much I do love Haiku!
Feb 21, 2016 @ 18:08:34
Thank you 🙂
Feb 23, 2016 @ 02:45:34
Both haiku are good but I loved the first one. The images are great too.