Just Jot It January: Compelled.

THIS IS  PART  OF  LINDAGHILL’S  JUST JOT IT JANUARY .  Today 24th January the  prompt is  Compelled  and it  was suggested  by  me  willowdot21.

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COMPELLED

She  had  him utterly  and  totally  compelled

Within her hand his  beating heart she  held.

She only  needed  to  look in his  eyes  and he  knew  damn well

He  was  hers, utterly , totally  and  completely  compelled .

 

He abandoned all else , work ,friends, family  cast aside

She  stripped him bare, he had  nothing  left to hide.

He gave her his all, walked on  glass,laid down his life

He’d not leave her side begged her not cause him strife.

 

He was addicted,needy, lusting  for her, under her  spell

No good  for anything  else  he  was completely  compelled.

She  sucked him dry  and used him up.She dragged him  to hell

He was lost, hopelessly  compelled broken and lonely … under her spell.

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15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Geetha B
    Jan 24, 2016 @ 07:40:08

    Beautifully penned. It made me think of this video I had watched a while ago. It was made to impart to people what a really life sucking beast the addiction to drugs could be, until the very last outcome, inevitable, death

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  2. LindaGHill
    Jan 24, 2016 @ 13:48:45

    Oooh, nice twist at the end! Fantastic poem, Willow. 😀
    Thanks again for the prompt!

    Reply

  3. Judy Martin
    Jan 24, 2016 @ 15:30:13

    Very powerful poem Willow.

    Reply

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  5. jetgirlcos
    Jan 25, 2016 @ 05:09:05

    Wow, that is striking, your poem! That was one of those poems that made me say “yikes!” at the end! Thanks for the prompt, too. 🙂

    Reply

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