LindaGHill said:Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is: “odd/even.” Use one, use both, use ’em any way you’d like! Enjoy!
Also the Just Jot It January for today 23rd January is the same as the Stream of Consciousness Saturday.
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Odd/Even
The odds were always against me
I always had to do what others wanted
That is not fair I was tied and not free.
To spread my wings is what I needed.
I decided to get sorted, to get even
To square the odds and stop the grieving.
I packed my bags and left a note
Across the wall in bold letters I wrote.
I am sick of dancing to your tune
No need to expect me back anytime soon
I have taken all I can stand and now I am leaving
I have taken all your odds and made them my evens!
Jan 23, 2016 @ 15:09:54
Very interesting poem, I love how you use the odds and even, very powerful and sure.
Jan 23, 2016 @ 15:58:51
Powerful and Sure thank you I do like that!xx
Jan 23, 2016 @ 17:37:49
Love this poem – powerful, positive and to the point!
Jan 23, 2016 @ 17:57:16
Thank you I am glad I made the point without over egging the point!