Blue sky wispy clouds float by
The view, a swarm of butterfly’sĀ
Pool to the left sea to the right
Silver moon dances on each at night.
Flowers more vibrant than I have seen
Pinch me is this a dream.
Falling asleep to the lapping of the sea
Waking to sun, every day is stress free
Caribbean music fills the air
I can dance here no one will care
Palm trees gently sway
I am awake this is real hooray.
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Caribbean sky and sea
Colour taste smell and sound
Spirits fly as senses run free
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This an idea Ronovanwrites thought up. A poem followed by a Haiku encapsulates the spirit of the poem.
He calls it a Freku ! Well I love a challenge. Here are the rules and pingback
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Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:24:27
This is really nice!
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:29:37
Thank you Geetha are you going to wrote one?
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:56:02
Welcome š I will be writing one yes. I just did the other prompt
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:58:41
I shall have a look. š
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:35:53
Wow lovely!
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:41:54
Hi Lynz thanks, I can read your posts in my email but my mobile can’t get on to your site so I can’t comment or like!!
Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:59:58
oh so sorry! š¦
Dec 07, 2015 @ 15:00:23
yes on my mobile there are many sites that say empty unless on my computer!
Dec 07, 2015 @ 15:18:05
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Dec 08, 2015 @ 11:06:33
Not as inciteful as your’s though! It a new medium dreampt up by Ronovan š
Dec 08, 2015 @ 09:48:52
Love it
Dec 13, 2015 @ 20:39:22
Thank you Ronovan always good to get feed back. š
Dec 13, 2015 @ 19:52:04
Vivid and beautiful!! I need to try writing a Freku!
Dec 13, 2015 @ 20:37:39
Yes have a go its fun