Caribbean Blue : A Freku

Blue sky wispy clouds float by
The view, a swarm of butterfly’sĀ 
Pool to the left sea to the right
Silver moon dances on each at night.

Flowers more vibrant than I have seen
Pinch me is this a dream.
Falling asleep to the lapping of the sea
Waking to sun, every day is stress free

Caribbean music fills the air
I can dance here no one will care
Palm trees gently sway
I am awake this is real hooray.

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Caribbean sky and sea
Colour taste smell and sound
Spirits fly as senses run free
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This an idea Ronovanwrites thought up. A  poem followed by a Haiku encapsulates the spirit of the poem.
He calls it a Freku ! Well I love a challenge. Here are the rules and pingback

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15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Geetha B
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:24:27

    This is really nice!

    Reply

  2. Lynz Real Cooking
    Dec 07, 2015 @ 14:35:53

    Wow lovely!

    Reply

  3. TanGental
    Dec 08, 2015 @ 09:48:52

    Love it

    Reply

  4. Trackback: RonovanWrites 74th #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Review | ronovanwrites
  5. beckyg1003
    Dec 13, 2015 @ 19:52:04

    Vivid and beautiful!! I need to try writing a Freku!

    Reply

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