Stream of Consciousness Saturday: Indescribable.Acrostic.

LindaGHill said: Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is: “indescribable.”  Use the actual word in your post or just base your post on something that defies description. My suggestion on this one; think about something that you’re passionate about and just start writing. 

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Last  nights horror  in Paris  prompted  me  to  write  this


It cannot  be happening  again

No man  should  cause  his  fellow  this pain

Does no one  learn  from  what has  gone before

Each not  caring  for  the other, in  the  name of  a  god making war.

“Soldiers”  they call  themselves dressed in  bomb concealing  clothes

Carrying   machine  guns to  shoot innocents  they  do not  know.

Ruining the  ordinary  and  the  sane  and  all in  a prophets name.

In a  second  the  night  was  blown  apart

Bombs  and  bullets  opening up  rivers of  blood at Paris’s heart

Allah would  not  really  want  all those lives  torn  apart

But man  has taken  his  words  and used  them  for his gain

Lost  the  meaning in translation  time  and time  again.

Evil it  seems  is on  the rise  with war  and hate its goal  and prize.

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Dale
    Nov 14, 2015 @ 14:40:15

    Beautifully done, Willow!
    Why is it most everyone I know, feels the same? That there is nothing stating to kill our fellow man in any of the religious writings, yet man chooses to interpret them that way. How so few can create such hatred…


  2. Lynz Real Cooking
    Nov 14, 2015 @ 19:26:59

    You are so correct! No religious teachings ask for violence that I know of! They all say peace, forgiveness and love! So sad! lovely post Willow!


  3. LindaGHill
    Nov 15, 2015 @ 01:10:03

    Well done, Willow. This really conveys the horror of what is happening far too often.


  4. Deborah
    Nov 15, 2015 @ 15:03:27

    Impressive how you used a simple form to rein in the horror that the world has experienced.


    • willowdot21
      Nov 15, 2015 @ 15:38:39

      Thanks Deborah, would that the answer to the problem was so simple! ❤


      • Deborah
        Nov 15, 2015 @ 15:57:16

        The answers are never that simple. Too many people are like dogs with bones. They think they have a cause, and right or wrong, no one can pull them from it. When the cause is good, that’s a very positive thing, but when the cause is evil, it only causes terror and horror, as we’ve seen this week.

      • willowdot21
        Nov 15, 2015 @ 16:01:06

        Yes you are so right ….maybe that is where the saying the dogs of war comes from.

  5. jetgirlcos
    Nov 16, 2015 @ 20:02:00

    You have so perfectly expressed the indescribable horror in your poem. Thank you, Willow. ❤


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