Stream of Consciousness Saturday: Paintballing.

LindaGHill said. Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is: “-eat.”  Use the word “eat” or add letters to it to make a different word. Don’t cheat!

Here is  the pingback!


Retreat, retreat ! shouted  Jen as if  stuck on  repeat!

We are  losing  this  game  we’re outnumbered  and  cannot  compete!

Yes shouted  the  others we are  going  nowhere, let us  go  eat!

EVERYONE ! Wave  that  white  flag our ammo is  replete!


Hurry up, over  here,  we’ve  saved you  guys  a seat

We won shouted  the  blue  team, we had  you  beat!

Not  fair shouted  the  red’s are  you  sure you did  not  cheat?

No  we won fair  and  square  and  so the  food is  your treat!


So they  laid down  their  paint guns, it had been fun

To  win was a feat especially  in this  heat

It was  supposed  to rain  but they’d  only  had  sun

Better  than last  time  when it had been cold with sleat!


Here are the rules:

1. Your post must be stream of consciousness writing, meaning no editing, (typos can be fixed) and minimal planning on what you’re going to write.

2. Your post can be as long or as short as you want it to be. One sentence – one thousand words. Fact, fiction, poetry – it doesn’t matter. Just let the words carry you along until you’re ready to stop.

3. There will be a prompt every week. Linda will post the prompt  on her blog on Friday, along with a reminder for you to join in. The prompt will be one random thing, but it will not be a subject. For instance,  Linda  will not say “Write about dogs”; the prompt will be more like, “Make your first sentence a question,” or “Begin with the word ‘The’.”

4. Ping back! It’s important, so that Linda  and other people can come and read your post! For example, in your post you can write “This post is part of SoCS:” and then copy and paste the URL found in your address bar at the top of Linda’s post into yours.  Your link will show up in Linda’s comments, for everyone to see. The most recent pingbacks will be found at the top.

5. Read at least one other person’s blog who has linked back their post. Even better, read everyone’s! If you’re the first person to link back, you can check back later, or go to the previous week, by following my category, “Stream of Consciousness Saturday,” which you’ll find right below the “Like” button on Linda’s post.

6. Copy and paste the rules (if you’d like to) in your post. The more people who join in, the more new bloggers you’ll meet and the bigger your community will get!

7. Have fun!



27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches.
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 05:49:48

    Excellent. Fun and entertaining.


  2. Paul
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 06:35:10

    When it comes to “eat”,
    You’re the one to beat.
    I’ll have a seat
    While we celebrate your feat.



  3. John W. Howell
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 11:51:33

    Fun. *ducks as paintball flies by*


  4. Lynz Real Cooking
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 11:52:34

    Love it so much fun!


  5. LindaGHill
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 13:43:01

    Haha! Well done, Willow! 😀


  6. Deborah Drucker
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 15:52:27

    I like the line about cold and sleat. 🙂


  7. joey
    Sep 26, 2015 @ 16:25:30

    That was fun 🙂


  8. jetgirlcos
    Sep 27, 2015 @ 04:20:14

    Very fun!! 🙂


  9. Opinionated Man
    Sep 27, 2015 @ 19:34:18

    I was always afraid someone would shoot me in the head…


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