The Man In My Dreams

In  that  second  I  surrendered  my  soul

Gave it up totally,untouched  pure  and whole.

My senses  went  haywire, I was at  sea

His  beauty  touched  every  inch of me.

 

Unable to move  I  grew roots, I had  to stay

My  eyes I  could  not  tear  away .

Nor  did  I  care  to, desire  was  all I  felt

My blood  rushing,  my  heart  full pelt.

 

The  stars  moved  across  the  skies

I saw  the sun set  and  the moon rise.

Reaching  out  I touched his perfect  skin

I stole  a kiss, I  was lost  now in  sin.

 

He opened his eyes as I  kissed  his lips

He smiled  as I  caressed him with my  fingertips.

His Raven screamed  at  me  then took to  angry flight

He took me  to him  and held  me and  we decended into the night.

 

The  sun found  me  cold  and  wet

All life  extinguished  an empty shell.

I looked  down at  my corpse  with no  regret

Though dead  I  am  so alive under  his  spell.

 

Forever  means  forever  when a vampire  you love

Yet I  am happy  and and  my  spirit  now  flies  like  a dove!

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul
    Jul 30, 2015 @ 18:36:15

    Neat poem Willow.

    Reply

  2. The Poetic Moose is on the Loose!
    Jul 30, 2015 @ 18:39:07

    Very impressive; perhaps ‘and and’ may be a typo – apart from that very sensual and evocative. Thank you G:)

    Reply

  3. 1EarthUnited
    Jul 30, 2015 @ 18:52:32

    Dark, sensitive, sensuous… i like it!
    Annie is amazing as usual. ❤

    Reply

  4. Amelia Blow
    Jul 30, 2015 @ 19:45:10

    I love the beginning, “In that second I surrendered my soul”

    Reply

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  6. socialbridge
    Aug 01, 2015 @ 07:55:08

    Willow, I was expecting Paul to ask if you’re okay!!!!

    Reply

  7. debyonce
    Aug 01, 2015 @ 21:28:04

    Love each sentence of the poem

    Please try to check my blog debyoncelife.wordpress.com

    Reply

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