Over the Abyss : Day 12 Nano Poblano

Still, all around is still

The night is black the air is chill

The fear is harsh inside  my guts

White pain through out my soul erupts.

 

Lost, lost am I

Screaming soundlessly into the sky.

On the abyss I stand

The devil waits to take my hand.

 

No one, no one cares to save my soul

Not one prepared to keep me whole

The demons start to tear me limb from limb

They greedily draw my intestines from within.

 

No more is left of me

 

Just  my tortured Spirit entrapped , unfree

Gone  forever over the abyss

No one cares I am not missed

 

 

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. marcus
    Nov 12, 2014 @ 08:39:35

    (((Awhoooo))) powerful

    Reply

  2. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Nov 13, 2014 @ 12:03:13

    Such a tortured soul. ❤ Ouch.

    Reply

  3. 1EarthUnited
    Nov 14, 2014 @ 05:32:52

    You are a beautiful free-spirit, thinking entraps us all. Powerful prose indeed!

    Reply

  4. Aquileana
    Nov 14, 2014 @ 13:17:25

    Stunning and raw… But also truly well penned!.
    Best wishes, Aquileana 😀

    Reply

  5. Roy McCarthy
    Nov 19, 2014 @ 07:18:51

    You should submit that one to Black Sabbath Willow, it would make a great song 🙂

    Reply

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