Finally Gottcha!

You took my innocence that day

You ripped it from me  and threw it away.

What did that feeling  do for you

Were  you pleased to see broken when you were  through.

 

You  took the words and  beat me until I bled

Threw me naked  from your bed

With actions  harsh you hurled me down

My face you screwed into the ground.

 

You dragged  me screaming  through the town

Before  your friends  you tore off my gown

Exposed my secrets, every hidden nook of me

You raped  me there  for all to see.

 

Left me broken and bleeding  for all to debase

You blew my life apart  left me with egg upon my face.

The pain, the shame was more than I could take

You enjoyed my downfall pushing  hard so I would brake.

 

The years have erased me from your mind.

Yet to me they have not kind.

You do not suspect my tender embrace.

My blade has found it’s target I see that in your face.

 

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Lisa  at   Underground Energy  has  suggested I link this  poem to  https://hastywords.wordpress.com/2014/10/30/dark-romance/  so here we go!

16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 00:46:37

    😦 Bravery in such pieces, Willow. xxxx

    Reply

  2. Roy McCarthy
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 07:04:39

    Powerful. I generally don’t ‘get’ poetry but you have a way of capturing attention.

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Oct 30, 2014 @ 08:14:34

      Thank you I am pleased to have got your attention. I am just trying to get the message in my writings over, I like to use verse. Thanks for the comment Roy. x

      Reply

  3. lynntesli
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 07:19:22

    gripping! Thanks for sharing!

    Reply

  4. socialbridge
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 07:39:47

    WOW, powerful writing, Willow.

    Reply

  5. giselzitrone
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 12:45:05

    Lieber Gruß und einen guten Donnerstag Gruß Gislinde

    Reply

  6. Lisa
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 15:34:09

    You should link this to Hasty’s last 31 days of horror thus week. It’s good.

    Reply

  7. Paul
    Oct 30, 2014 @ 18:43:49

    Love the last line Willow – I guess that means i understood the rest. My only suggestion is that she turn the blade while it is in.

    Reply

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