Decent into hate

The fear rises from the pit of  my stomach pushing up through the bile

Depositing  itself  on my tongue. Burning searing  all the while

The anger comes from nowhere, no rhyme or reason for his hate

All at once the shouting starts, warning signs come too late .

 

Screaming  at each other words are razor sharp insults flying

They hurt as much as blows  but I’ll be damned if I’ll let him see me crying!

Hate burning into our hearts and souls. You are dragging me slowly over  the coals

Where does this angst come from why do we keep fighting  what evil sets  the goals.

 

When did we drive our love to this hate

When did life sour  the food on our plate

It all started out so fine we were shining stars

Now we are muddied  and blooded and covered in scars.

 

The fear rises from the pit of  my stomach pushing up through the bile

Depositing  itself  on my tongue. Burning searing  all the while

The anger comes from nowhere, no rhyme or reason for his hate

All at once the shouting starts, warning signs come too late .

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul
    Aug 24, 2014 @ 21:54:55

    Very real Willow.

    Reply

  2. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Aug 24, 2014 @ 22:50:13

    You have a heart of steel, Willow.This is stunningly hard work. xx Chilling.

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Aug 25, 2014 @ 09:02:52

      Relationships sour and turn to resentment and even hate, most of the time they rub along fine most of the time but suddenly for no reason it blows up. 😦 xxxxx

      Reply

  3. Deborah
    Aug 24, 2014 @ 23:17:24

    The feeling of desperation is so strong. Very powerful and sad.

    Reply

  4. bearspawprint
    Aug 24, 2014 @ 23:33:48

    😦

    Reply

  5. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:01:17

    Terrible how something that started out so loving and giving turns sour and hateful. Horrible to live through but looks good on the page. ❤

    Reply

  6. socialbridge
    Aug 26, 2014 @ 11:13:17

    Hugs, Willow, and a kiss from the sea!

    Reply

  7. kate58
    Aug 26, 2014 @ 12:46:07

    More than a descent into hate, it was a descent into sorrow.

    Reply

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