Acrostic Poem, Trouble

Treacherous times ahead

Rumours  of nasty  things said.

Out spoken thoughts well hidden

Ups and downs  of life unbidden.

Bound  by secret ties

Lost  forever under stormy skies.

Ever  hopeless ever lost  storm clouds rolling in .


27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Jul 30, 2014 @ 22:01:58

    I had such a wonderful day….then I let an energy derail me again
    I’m watching those lost storm clouds roll in waves of thunder
    oh well tomorrow is another day….
    I like this song Willow, Thank you for sharing
    I like your thoughts….
    Take Care…You Matter…


  2. Deborah
    Jul 30, 2014 @ 22:10:17

    The trouble is palatable. Your description is spot on! Let’s hope it passes over quickly. Unfortunately, trouble can be rather stubborn. But we can hope for the best.


  3. SalvaVenia
    Jul 30, 2014 @ 22:16:58

    Nice idea and nicely transposed. I like this very much. 🙂


  4. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Jul 31, 2014 @ 00:56:35

    This is TERRIFIC!
    Perfectly clear but to what end? Whose? Hopefully good and peaceful.


  5. Gibber
    Jul 31, 2014 @ 01:15:05

    Powerful 🙂


  6. Paul
    Jul 31, 2014 @ 02:45:45

    Well done Willow. I enjoyed it – and the video.


  7. socialbridge
    Jul 31, 2014 @ 07:37:25

    Powerful stuff, cleverly written!


  8. Brenda Davis Harsham
    Aug 02, 2014 @ 02:15:39

    It’s a dark beginning, storm clouds ahead! Land ho!


  9. Lisa
    Aug 02, 2014 @ 20:16:59



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