Rain (A Trio of Haiku)

04 Jul 2014 14 Comments

by willowdot21 in Uncategorized Tags: HAIKU, rain

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Rain like stair rods fall.

Drenching, soaking , flooding all.

Cleansing all the pain.

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Pitta Patta comes the rain

Banishes dust ,gone

Waking seeds to life again.

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Jump for joy, splash, wet, your legs

Storm clouds gather over head

Smash,smash all your eggs.

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Paul
Jul 04, 2014 @ 22:18:56

Very nice. I’ve always loved the rain Willow. When I drove tractor-trailer, it had sleeper berth. The roof was fibreglass and when I would go to sleep, hearing the rain on the roof was so peaceful. It was like my own personal cocoon while the world got a shower. All the trees and plants soaking up their life force while I remained dry and cozy. I like to walk in the rain too – so cleansing. Thanks for the Haiku – well done Willow.

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- willowdot21
  Jul 05, 2014 @ 04:20:26
  
  Yes the rain on a roof can be so soothing especially at night. I also like a walk in the and woow the beautiful smell of freshness when everything is fresh and clean. Thank you for your kind words Paul. xxx
  
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  - Paul
    Jul 05, 2014 @ 04:36:39
    
    Hi Willow! I’m just looking at your time stamp and it says 4:20 am. It is only 4:20 in the middle of the Atlanttic. Maybe your computer has not done the last time change – which would put you some where in western Africa or England. Just curious
  - willowdot21
    Jul 05, 2014 @ 04:57:32
    
    I am in England. But the time is 6. 55am . where are you roughly speaking..
Paul
Jul 05, 2014 @ 05:12:23

Ottawa, Canada. It’s a little after 2 am here. If you check the time stamp on your comment on this post, you’ll see a time stamp 2 hrs earlier. Must be where the server is. Good Morning!

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- willowdot21
  Jul 05, 2014 @ 05:29:15
  
  Hi and good morning to you too Sir. It is raining here soft summer rain after a week of hot dry sun (well hot for us.) I just fed the birds and the garden smelt so fresh and sweet. X
  
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Let's CUT the Crap!
Jul 06, 2014 @ 12:45:00

I love the sound of the rain’s pitter patter not the vicious kind. I live in the lower level of this house and don’t get to hear the hear the rain much anymore. I like your trio of Haikus. Each one unlike the next, each setting a different tone. 🙂

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- willowdot21
  Jul 06, 2014 @ 16:20:46
  
  Thank you so much, I am always fascinated by rain. I love light summer rain, and lashing winter deluges too! 😉
  
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  - Let's CUT the Crap!
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 19:26:30
    
    The hard kind puts me in mind of destruction, what with all the high winds and goings on.
  - willowdot21
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 19:30:10
    
    Yes I hate high winds they make me nervous. 🙂 and they can be so destructive.
  - Let's CUT the Crap!
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 19:32:02
  - willowdot21
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 19:33:01
    
    Week!!
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- willowdot21
  Jul 08, 2014 @ 11:56:36
  
  Thank you too the three loveliest girls I know.
  
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