Sitting at the same table day after day
Silence screaming deafening, though there is nothing left to say.
The cracks showing more as the years go past
Huge the ever growing gulf between us now the dye is cast.
Reaching out to try and touch you, maybe reach you this time
You ignore me, look away , I’ve failed again. What was my crime?
Facing down the days, lost and alone in a painful daze.
What happened to us, lost forever now in this dark,dark maze.
Acrostic Stone wall
Simple words become a damnation
Taunting barbs of hates creation
Only together out of habit ,out of fear
No longer passion, just dry eyes not a tear.
Every day an empty void
Wasting our lives, communication cut to the bone
Arguing, when did this house became no longer home.
Longing for a touch,a tender look
Lost the days when our passion the world shook.
Mar 26, 2014 @ 22:13:42
I feel a lot of pain in these two pieces. Dark and broken. 😦
Well done.
Mar 26, 2014 @ 22:19:56
Thank you.
Mar 27, 2014 @ 00:25:12
😉
Mar 27, 2014 @ 11:37:53
🙂 reaching out.
Mar 27, 2014 @ 19:11:59
😉
Mar 26, 2014 @ 23:08:25
Feelings, deep and dark, wanting to communicate, yet held back by a wall, silence…. Wonderfully done, both times Sweet Willow. Hugs aplenty always. xPenx
xxx)
(Ooh, and don’t be scared of the Boogeyman, I’ll protect thee
Mar 27, 2014 @ 11:40:20
Hugs back to you too. Sad but common situation..
Thanks I need protection from the boogie man 😦 xxx
Mar 27, 2014 @ 13:36:24
❤ xx
Mar 27, 2014 @ 13:42:13
🙂 xxx xxx xxx xxx
Mar 26, 2014 @ 23:14:41
Hugs xxxx
Mar 27, 2014 @ 11:38:25
Hugs to you too xxx
Mar 27, 2014 @ 00:58:42
Milady Willow…
Extremely evocative, my dear… Your sorrow is reflected in my tears for you… Be strong, though, you’re not alone…. Sorry I can’t stay longer to see more posts… I try to get by when I’m not in too much pain, but, tonight isn’t one of those times… I’ll be back when I can stay longer, see more posts, & have the wherewithal to talk more…
Take care, you are loved….
Mar 27, 2014 @ 01:06:49
each broken part has a place
just waiting for someone to figure out where it belongs again…
such a stillness within these words….
)0(
Mar 27, 2014 @ 11:36:48
A sad but common situation. Thanks for reading and commenting I value your thoughts always xxx
Mar 27, 2014 @ 12:55:05
all too common …
sad how only one side usually sees or feels
until its too late and the other gives up
you’re such a strong visual writer of real life Willow
)0(
Mar 27, 2014 @ 03:40:40
XXX
Mar 27, 2014 @ 03:40:54
http://bearspawprint.wordpress.com/2014/03/26/koyaanisqatsi/
Mar 27, 2014 @ 11:34:59
Thanks Bear this is all very interesting
Mar 27, 2014 @ 12:35:00
Next week is CLOUDS ……
Mar 27, 2014 @ 14:02:32
I know this wall. Well enough to know it can come down. Seems a lifetime may pass in the meantime.
Mar 27, 2014 @ 18:07:53
Yes that is true, this wall is there but somehow unrecognised!
Mar 27, 2014 @ 15:33:30
Evokes so much emptiness, sorrow, loneliness, sadness, desperation, loss. A flame suffocating from lack of oxygen. Very well done!
Russ
Mar 27, 2014 @ 18:01:23
Thank you Ross it is a sad situation sadly more comon than admitted! Be blessed and thank you for your kind words!! xxxxxxxxxx
Mar 29, 2014 @ 11:32:51
Such power in your words and images! Those walls are so strong and no one has the strength (or desire) to dismantle them. They become prison walls for too many. Once again, thanks for tackling the tough issues.
Mar 29, 2014 @ 20:08:41
Walls are meant to be broken down sadly that is not always possible! xxxxx
Mar 30, 2014 @ 05:41:18
I know this wall as well… I wrote about it here (http://samanthamariahjane.wordpress.com/2007/06/09/treat-me-like-a-stranger/) … and there… in what now seems like (dark) ages ago… Believe it or not… we also conquered that wall… but, not before nearly everything else had to pretty much crumble around it as well…
Mar 30, 2014 @ 05:48:29
Yes I do believe you . It is almost impossible but the view from the other side is worth the effort. Well done you. Going to read your post now. 🙂 xxx