FanFoFeb : Undying Love.

It is love  eternal, love undying

Millennia  after millennia of pain and crying.

So deep the scars of love were carved

A million years since his last breath and she is still scarred.


Oh! she bleeds

Dragging  around in widows’ weeds

The pain is constant it never stops

Her tears are huge  they sting like acid drops.


Yes  she knows she must survive

A force  not human keeps her alive.

Damn her heart it will not stop  beating beating

Like a lamb to the slaughter bleating bleating.


It was not to be like this

She was promised eternal bliss

The figure dark, one like her

He had warned her to have a care.


Suicide  was the only way

For the lovers to be together for forever and a day.

They made the pact by pale moonlight

He was to run them both through with her sword but he did not do it right.


She  had told him what to do

She told good and true

The sword must run from her to him

Her blood would make an immortal of  him.


Sadly by his  own mistake

It was his life  first that he did take.

Their blood too late was intermingled

As his soul escaped  the first pain of grief began to tingle .


Oh! she bleeds

Dragging  around in widows’ weeds

The pain is constant it never stops

Her tears are huge  they sting like acid drops.

This  poem  was inspired  by Bear, read her poem here  it is beautiful and so worth reading. 


Post on your site, and join FanFoFeb . The rules are easy!

1. It’s never too late to join in, since the “FanFoFeb   Fantasy for February lasts all month . (it doesn’t have to be a post) counts as a “post.” If it makes it to WordPress that day, great! If it waits a week to get from the sticky note to your screen, no problem!
2. If you write a FanFoFeb  . post on your blog, you can ping it back to the above link to make sure everyone participating knows where to find it.
3. Write anything!
4. Have fun!



14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Feb 24, 2014 @ 22:37:59

    so many levels your words spin and weave endless grieving..
    this is so Beautiful Willow..and yes I went to visit and I really enjoyed Bear’s too…
    must be a day for grieving love…I wrote one earlier

    This does pull at the soul…
    Take Care…You Matter…


    • willowdot21
      Feb 25, 2014 @ 12:00:03

      Thank you Maryrose I guessed you would understand you beautiful posts always show you wisdom and knowledge. A sad tale indeed with no relief in sight. I am so glad that you visited and enjoyed Bear’s poem it is so beautiful.
      thank you for caring be careful of yourself you matter too. xx


  2. bearspawprint
    Feb 24, 2014 @ 22:50:07

    Oh My. 🙂 ‘Tis not what I imagines it would be at all. Willow, you always amaze me. 🙂 🙂 .


  3. penpusherpen
    Feb 25, 2014 @ 08:31:26

    A tragic tale, well told, lovers once and now she is left to mourn. ’tis inspiring too .. . xx


    • willowdot21
      Feb 25, 2014 @ 09:48:05

      A sad mistake and it would only have taken a second but sadly he had not heeded her words imagine her pain realizing all was lost in that second. The agony of knowing he was dead SNF she must live on. Hugs to you Pen xxx


  4. Johnny Ojanpera
    Feb 25, 2014 @ 13:26:09

    Willow, this made me bleed a little bit. Wonderful writing. Wow.


  5. johnallenrichter
    Feb 27, 2014 @ 16:19:31

    Is there life after love?…… so many ask that question as though it is a mystery. Of course there is life after love. Sometimes it can be like a prison, every breath a chain rattle, every heartbeat another agony. The real question should be is there love after life…. For of love and life, only one is eternal….. Entrancing poetry here Willow……


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