FanFoFeb : The Lovers

The Lovers

The Lovers

Meet me at the station she said.

I will he replied, his mind in her bed.

Smothering a smile she shifted her legs

I need you honey, come he begs, begs.

 

Here feet tip tap along, in a hurry

He is off and out the office, scurry

Together in a lustful embrace

Hot breath in her ear, your place, place.

 

Difficult to walk when so aroused

Her nipples harden under her blouse

Rushing now they can’t wait, breathing

Touching, exciting , needing, needing.

 

Finally  behind the door once more

Clothes scattered hastily on the floor

Legs wide soon passions are sated

Time now back to their lives, hated, hated .

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I saw  the Monotetra on Ramblings  from a Mum’s  page and wanted to have a try.

My  poem, The lovers ,  is inspired by the statue at St Pancras  Station London

Fingers  crossed I got it right!

The monotetra is a poetic form developed by Michael Walker.
Here are the basic rules:
Comprised of quatrains (four-line stanzas) in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of 8 syllables per line.
Each quatrain consists of mono-rhymed lines (so each line in the first stanza has the same type of rhyme, as does each line in the second stanza, etc.)
The final line of each stanza repeats the same four syllables
This poem can be as short as one quatrain and as long as a poet wishes

FanFoFeb   Fantasy for February.

Post on your site, and join FanFoFeb . The rules are easy!

1. It’s never too late to join in, since the “FanFoFeb   Fantasy for February lasts all month . (it doesn’t have to be a post) counts as a “post.” If it makes it to WordPress that day, great! If it waits a week to get from the sticky note to your screen, no problem!
2. If you write a FanFoFeb  . post on your blog, you can ping it back to the above link to make sure everyone participating knows where to find it.
3. Write anything!
4. Have fun!

44 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ramblingsfromamum
    Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:21:43

    Darling I love what you done with the Monotetra, just check your syllable count of 8 per line, such erotic writing my lovely, you made me blush 😉 thank you for the Ping 🙂 x

    Reply

  2. Deborah
    Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:23:46

    FanFoFeb sounds great, but I have not much fantasy in my writing life. I will like seeing what you do, as always. 🙂

    Reply

  3. Audrey Howitt
    Feb 01, 2014 @ 00:29:49

    Erotic and well done!

    Reply

  4. penpusherpen
    Feb 01, 2014 @ 09:56:05

    Felt the fun and the erotic tension you described so well, Sweet Willow, (very well described may I say!! Blushing here!! 😉 and I recognised the Statue from St Pancras, brought back sweet memories) hugs aplenty, always. xPenx

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:22:15

      Glad you enjoyed this one Pen memories are always good. I hope it was not too embarrassing. Not everyone noticed it was a type of poem I not tried before. Xxxx

      Reply

  5. davebarclay1954
    Feb 01, 2014 @ 12:35:16

    Wow, so strong, so passionate, so forbidden, lovely idea fanfofeb but please keep the posts coming you are more talented a poet than I so I won’t even try to outdo you. Love your posts x

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:34:49

      Hi Dave thank you for your kind words. I am no better than any one, this is not a competition and there is no skill needed, and no judging involved so please do, if you wish join. The fantasy means dreams wants or fun. Again thanks for the praise and I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. xx;-)

      Reply

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  7. Deborah
    Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:52:07

    hmmmmmm, I tried to link back here, but I don’t think I was successful.

    Reply

  8. zendictive
    Feb 02, 2014 @ 11:54:52

    tantalizing (

    Reply

  9. Deborah
    Feb 02, 2014 @ 12:47:48

    Sorry to bother you, Willow, but are all the days supposed to linked back to this post? Or did you have something else in mind? For some reason, I’m confused. 😉

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Feb 02, 2014 @ 13:05:17

      No they don’t need to be I just thought if anyone fancied writing a post of fantasy or fantastical nature they could just put the FanFoFeb in the title and in the tags . No worries no pressure , no wonder every on thinks I am bonkers . xxxxxxx

      Reply

      • Deborah
        Feb 02, 2014 @ 13:13:30

        No one else can see them if they aren’t linked. 😉 But I see that you just posted something new, so I’ll attach my new one to that post. 😀

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  11. simon7banks
    Feb 03, 2014 @ 15:14:39

    I’ve seen that statue and it is pretty sexy for a railway station.

    Reply

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