Meet me at the station she said.
I will he replied, his mind in her bed.
Smothering a smile she shifted her legs
I need you honey, come he begs, begs.
Here feet tip tap along, in a hurry
He is off and out the office, scurry
Together in a lustful embrace
Hot breath in her ear, your place, place.
Difficult to walk when so aroused
Her nipples harden under her blouse
Rushing now they can’t wait, breathing
Touching, exciting , needing, needing.
Finally behind the door once more
Clothes scattered hastily on the floor
Legs wide soon passions are sated
Time now back to their lives, hated, hated .
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I saw the Monotetra on Ramblings from a Mum’s page and wanted to have a try.
My poem, The lovers , is inspired by the statue at St Pancras Station London
Fingers crossed I got it right!
The monotetra is a poetic form developed by Michael Walker.
Here are the basic rules:
Comprised of quatrains (four-line stanzas) in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of 8 syllables per line.
Each quatrain consists of mono-rhymed lines (so each line in the first stanza has the same type of rhyme, as does each line in the second stanza, etc.)
The final line of each stanza repeats the same four syllables
This poem can be as short as one quatrain and as long as a poet wishes
FanFoFeb Fantasy for February.
Post on your site, and join FanFoFeb . The rules are easy!
1. It’s never too late to join in, since the “FanFoFeb Fantasy for February lasts all month . (it doesn’t have to be a post) counts as a “post.” If it makes it to WordPress that day, great! If it waits a week to get from the sticky note to your screen, no problem!
2. If you write a FanFoFeb . post on your blog, you can ping it back to the above link to make sure everyone participating knows where to find it.
3. Write anything!
4. Have fun!
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:21:43
Darling I love what you done with the Monotetra, just check your syllable count of 8 per line, such erotic writing my lovely, you made me blush 😉 thank you for the Ping 🙂 x
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:30:17
You deserve the ping you gave me the prompt. Off to bed now so will try harder on next one. Night have a good day. Xx
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:37:01
Sleep well honey, you did well … where’s that fan? 😉 x
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:25:25
Thanks I did the dreamless sleep of the exhausted. Have a good day. xxx
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:23:46
FanFoFeb sounds great, but I have not much fantasy in my writing life. I will like seeing what you do, as always. 🙂
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:31:43
It can jus be made up or not fantasy at all its jus for fun. 😉
Jan 31, 2014 @ 23:39:03
Fun, I might be able to do. hahaha
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:24:04
Good, we love fun
Feb 01, 2014 @ 00:29:49
Erotic and well done!
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:23:26
Thank you so much for reading. Xx
Feb 01, 2014 @ 09:56:05
Felt the fun and the erotic tension you described so well, Sweet Willow, (very well described may I say!! Blushing here!! 😉 and I recognised the Statue from St Pancras, brought back sweet memories) hugs aplenty, always. xPenx
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:22:15
Glad you enjoyed this one Pen memories are always good. I hope it was not too embarrassing. Not everyone noticed it was a type of poem I not tried before. Xxxx
Feb 01, 2014 @ 12:35:16
Wow, so strong, so passionate, so forbidden, lovely idea fanfofeb but please keep the posts coming you are more talented a poet than I so I won’t even try to outdo you. Love your posts x
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:34:49
Hi Dave thank you for your kind words. I am no better than any one, this is not a competition and there is no skill needed, and no judging involved so please do, if you wish join. The fantasy means dreams wants or fun. Again thanks for the praise and I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. xx;-)
Feb 01, 2014 @ 13:52:07
hmmmmmm, I tried to link back here, but I don’t think I was successful.
Feb 01, 2014 @ 14:35:15
All good Deborah you linked back thank you. Xxx
Feb 01, 2014 @ 14:38:38
Oh good, it didn’t show up when I tried to look. Thanks for letting me know. I’ve already started my post for tomorrow. 😀
Feb 01, 2014 @ 17:49:29
Well that’s brilliant always good to be ahead. xx
Feb 01, 2014 @ 22:14:20
It’s more about getting a handle on things so that February doesn’t turn out to be a sad extension of January. 😉
Feb 01, 2014 @ 22:38:41
I do understand my life is a nightmare too! mind you that is just a permanent state of affairs for me .
Feb 02, 2014 @ 11:54:52
tantalizing (
Feb 02, 2014 @ 12:30:54
That is the idea ! 😉
Feb 02, 2014 @ 12:47:48
Sorry to bother you, Willow, but are all the days supposed to linked back to this post? Or did you have something else in mind? For some reason, I’m confused. 😉
Feb 02, 2014 @ 13:05:17
No they don’t need to be I just thought if anyone fancied writing a post of fantasy or fantastical nature they could just put the FanFoFeb in the title and in the tags . No worries no pressure , no wonder every on thinks I am bonkers . xxxxxxx
Feb 02, 2014 @ 13:13:30
No one else can see them if they aren’t linked. 😉 But I see that you just posted something new, so I’ll attach my new one to that post. 😀
Feb 03, 2014 @ 15:14:39
I’ve seen that statue and it is pretty sexy for a railway station.
Feb 03, 2014 @ 15:49:02
Yes it is en eye opener! 🙂