NaBloPoMo: Abandoned to the cold!

All  strings  torn and broken I carry my heart in a jar

I search for you eyes downcast I follow your scent  from afar.

I told you I would  do it, rip my heart out for you in a beat

I have cleaned it and pickled it and it is now ready for you to eat.

 

The  wind  blows through the forest ice cold it comes from the north.

I no longer  feel it’s icy chill as half naked on  my quest for you I set forth.

Life’s blood dripping from my wound, my eyes hold a dead glassy stare

My body aches for you my my soul screams out in pain,my hopes go nowhere.

 

The tiny, tight pleats on  my dress reflect the meanness of your being

My bared  bosom a reminder  of the love I gave and  nurturing

Free, unfettered there for you to suckle from, and hold

But you have cast me off unwanted abandoned to the cold.

 

 

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. russtowne
    Nov 16, 2013 @ 01:38:16

    “Abandoned to the cold.” Love it, especially the last line. It almost made me shiver.

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  2. kelihasablog
    Nov 16, 2013 @ 19:57:50

    I LOVE this one Willow! And great choice of picture to accompany! 😀

    Reply

  3. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Nov 16, 2013 @ 22:17:59

    I forgot you are doing this challenge, Willow – it’s quite a challenge so truly, well done.

    I like how you described the picture/its meaning. I did think, on first look, it was odd she was topless, but you give it meaning. Well written, Willow 🙂

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  4. I HAVE A VOICE
    Nov 17, 2013 @ 02:06:56

    Fantastic frame of words! Loved it! Faithfully Debbie

    Reply

  5. simon7banks
    Nov 17, 2013 @ 11:13:42

    But from the expression on her face, I’d suggest Prince (Un)charming should steer well clear of her.

    Reply

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