Judgement

I stood before before you naked as the day that I was born

The look on your face cut me so deep I took shelter , I hid forlorn.

Nothing to cover me, no veil no tricks had I up my sleeve

All I was, was what you saw . Words  fell from my lips they screamed to be believed.

I did not have enough hands to cover my body or my disgrace

I felt such shame for my shape I put my hands up to my face.

Cold was I and wretched my body quaking from the cold

All eyes were turned to my nakedness I felt them burning me the young and the old.

They saw my every crack and crevice  they searched my every contour

It was as if they could see every move I had made with lovers that had gone before.

Their gaze bore into me searing, devouring burning like hell’s fire

But worse I read their filthy thoughts as they let loose their unhealthy desire.

On and on they crept until they reached my soul.

Even though I begged and pleaded they took and used me and devoured my body whole.

I thought you might show mercy, I thought you might save my soul .

But you just sat back and enjoyed the sight of me being taken, used and defiled as the demons devoured my body and soul.

I stood before before you naked as the day that I was born

The look on your face cut me so deep, I took shelter , I hid forlorn.

Nothing to cover me, no veil no tricks had I up my sleeve

All I was, was what you saw . Words  fell from my lips, they screamed to be believed.

 

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. russtowne
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 21:39:58

    Powerful. Haunting.

    Reply

  2. bearspawprint
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 21:54:36

    Don’t worry. I read that final judgment is passed not by humans but by all of the animals you have ever come in contact with.

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Sep 14, 2013 @ 09:56:38

      Ah! that is comforting because I usually get on well with animals….. Not so sure about insects…. I shall be in trouble if spiders are in the equation!

      Reply

  3. acuriousgal
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 22:16:15

    So powerful!!

    Reply

  4. sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches.
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 22:50:23

    Amazing and so on point.

    Reply

  5. Bernice
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 23:17:57

    All I can say is… WOW!!

    Reply

  6. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 00:26:28

    this one cuts deep….it feels more than hear…
    explosive comes to mind Willow….
    Take Care…You Matter….
    )0(
    maryrose

    Reply

  7. Eric Alagan
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 00:51:19

    As they devour my nakedness, so shall they be cloaked and so shall they be revealed

    Peace and blessings, Willow dear,
    Eric

    Reply

  8. 47whitebuffalo
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 02:54:07

    Stark naked
    and raving mad
    yeah, we’ve all been here one way or another

    Hi willowdot21

    Reply

  9. saminaiqbal27
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 11:23:07

    Very powerful imagery. The photos are very impressive supporting the theme so well. Very well expressed Willow. Take care my friend and God bless.

    Reply

  10. I HAVE A VOICE
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 20:49:57

    We can’t seem to understand that other -judgement is really self judgment ! Exceptional writing ! xoxo

    Reply

  11. reikiheidi
    Sep 15, 2013 @ 08:08:11

    “I stand befor you naked/And that is not enough/I tell you my sins whole hearted/And that is not enough/I weep tears of shame unashamedly/And that is enough”

    xx

    Reply

  12. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Sep 17, 2013 @ 06:45:50

    Oh my God – on & on they crept until they reached my soul – this line really hit it hard, Willow. Your writing is so good these days. Just wonderful.

    Reply

  13. josephbrewster
    Sep 21, 2013 @ 04:34:02

    A shiver ran up my spine reading this. Such power…deep

    Reply

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