He stands in the shadows

He’s standing there in the  shadows and he is watching me and you

Waiting to see if we if we are doing as we should do.Do we even know what to do.

He is crying in the shadows hiding

He sees that we are, deaf to his tidings.

He sees brother killing brother

Lost sisters grieving for lovers

Children dying reaching out for their mothers.

Why is he watching  why does he not speak.

Is he letting them suffer, suffer in vein setting the strong to kill the weak.

He sees the huge eagle on one side He picks up the dice and hurls them, he weeps as they collide.

His children are fighting, have they ever stopped .

They’re squabbling  and and arguing about the bombs they have dropped.

They lie about who did it and who did not …………

For the innocents caught in the crossfire they care not a jot.

He’s standing there in the  shadows and he is watching me and you

Waiting to see if we if we are doing as we should, do we even know what to do.

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. IdealisticRebel
    Sep 12, 2013 @ 22:35:14

    very impressive. thanks for sharing. your worrds are very powerful. Hugs, Barbara


  2. Bernice
    Sep 12, 2013 @ 22:50:06

    so very true…. the fighting never ends…


  3. russtowne
    Sep 12, 2013 @ 23:24:04

    I like the imagery of him standing in the shadows. Light in darkness watching darkness in the light.


  4. prayingforoneday
    Sep 13, 2013 @ 00:51:18

    So powerful.
    I want to learn poetry and I speak to many who are trying to make me understand the words. I got this one I think..

    Was the man God?

    Beautiful Willow..



    Sep 13, 2013 @ 03:56:13

    a very loud clarion for compassionate virtues ~ excellent !


  6. Eric Alagan
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 00:57:19

    Yes, baffling questions – though many of us might know what to do, even fewer venture to do – as for the vast majority >>> too caught up grappling with life


    • willowdot21
      Sep 14, 2013 @ 09:59:36

      I think I may of said this before Eric but I believe it to be so true. “It only takes a few good men to do nothing for evil to triumph ” God please help us all to be brave enough to stand up and be counted.


  7. Will of Heart
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 02:59:16

    This piece showed what is the roots of all feuds happening all over the world, speak for truth and reality, if we just listen to Him and do what is right and just… very powerful my friend, I love it… best regards 🙂


  8. saminaiqbal27
    Sep 14, 2013 @ 11:17:39

    Very true picture of today’s world in a very impressive form. Very powerful and the message is great. Thanks for sharing.


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