OH! But He Was Beautiful

Oh! but he was beautiful as he hit the ground that day.

His eyes rested on mine a second before he ran away.

He was tall and dark with long and lustrous hair

He was thin and gaunt but beautiful  with eyes that said “Beware”

Days and months went by  but his face from my mind would not fade.

I knew if he asked of me anything I would do as he bade.

I carried on I worked and slept all the motions to do  with life.

Though my dreams were filled with sex, fear and strife.

Then one night as I returned from some insignificant chore.

He was there  upon the wall he looked at me and beckoned , I could not resist or ignore.

I went to him and begged him to take me whole

His eyes burned into mine as whispered, “have a care I want your soul”

Scared as I was I could not move I could not turn  and flee

Strangest of all there was a voice in me saying “Yes, yes take all of me.”

He did he took my hand he touched my head he snatched away my rosary

You will no have need of this  you are mine your body and soul belong to me!

I did not remember the words he had that first night thought to me.

He took my body as I had never known before

The  touch of his hand upon my skin , his force as he entered me, thrilled my very core..

More and more he took of me and I loved every minute

I did not care what he did if this was ecstasy I was absolutely in it!

He just kept on exciting me  he never seemed to tire

I found it hard all my senses screaming more  my whole being was on fire!

He left we hot he left me wet  he left me still not sated

The pain I felt as soon as  he was gone has never yet abated.

I knew he would be back for me for he owned me body and soul

But the want  in me was raging, a gaping want without him I was not whole.

Well yes he did come back for me for he had drank my blood and I had drunk of him

So now we hunt together I can lure the beautiful  ones  in

For him to feast upon them blood and skin.

So for now he is in love with me

I hope that  we will always be in lust for all eternity!

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. 47whitebuffalo
    Aug 18, 2013 @ 19:29:17

    Dark yet loving at the same time.

    Came from bearspawprint to visit.


  2. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Aug 18, 2013 @ 23:04:53

    oh the forbidden love that stands within the shadows
    one feels the seduction of darkness in their soul….

    oh Willow I like this VERY much !
    Thank you for sharing…
    Take Care…


    • willowdot21
      Aug 19, 2013 @ 11:37:53

      Thank you Maryrose I loved writing, love / lust is so close. Desire can turn nasty ….. hopefully there is not too much need for blood sucking!! Hope you are well dear friend. 😉 xxxx


  3. saminaiqbal27
    Aug 20, 2013 @ 00:02:28

    I love the poem, the passion and the desire and the darkness. It has a haunting feeling about it. Great post. Take care Willow and keep inspiring.


  4. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Aug 20, 2013 @ 21:10:46

    Love eternal for us all, I do wish, Willow.

    Very, VERY passionate!


  5. sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches.
    Aug 23, 2013 @ 08:10:22

    Your talent has a broad range. I always have to stop and read when I see your name (even when I’ve used up my allotted keyboard time per the doc). Keep writing.


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