Eyes closed better to hear , the gatekeeper watches as the shadows grow near.
Her nerves are steady and her heartbeat silent she knows there is much to fear.
The mists of time curl cold around her well placed feet
Honest is she but she faces the dark and the shadows full of deceit.
Her sister sword in hand defies all with flashing eyes she makes her stand.
With the knowledge of all she knows, every second will run as planned.
Suddenly across the void a lonely bell begins to toll
Layer upon layer , life , time and legend will unfold.
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Jul 28, 2013 @ 00:24:45
I like the thought that legend will unfold 🙂
Great words… as always.
Jul 28, 2013 @ 09:08:25
Oh Noeleen I do hope the story lives up to its early promise.
Jul 29, 2013 @ 09:01:49
definitely full of promise Sweet Willow. and living upto that promise too. hugs aplenty xPenx
Jul 29, 2013 @ 09:34:58
Thanks Pen that is very reassuring to know , hugs eternal. xxxxxx
Jul 29, 2013 @ 12:41:42
Wonderful…an epic series! Love what I’m reading.
Jul 29, 2013 @ 19:57:44
So glad that you are enjoying it! 😉
Jul 29, 2013 @ 21:13:23
Very Nice….and lovely images. I need to go back and read more!
Jul 29, 2013 @ 21:15:06
I am ver pleased that you like this story!
Jul 31, 2013 @ 05:29:38
I am so enjoying this gatekeepers epic stories. Keep writing and you will find happiness and peace in it. Best wishes.
Jul 31, 2013 @ 08:38:22
I am so glad that you are enjoying this saga. It is no easy aving to find hidden time to blog and read and comment and WordPress playing up and as good as blocking a huge swath of UK users, me included 😉 it is tedious and frustrating but I shall persist. I hope you are are well and happy hugs xxxxxx xx
Jul 31, 2013 @ 09:52:14
Thanks for being so brave and courageous. I have all my best wishes and prayers for you. Heat gets to me these days and I become lazy. I love your stories these to me are true literature. Keep at it and it will bring you glory. Right now is a struggle time but you are doing very well. I am we’ll and happy. Take care my friend.
Aug 02, 2013 @ 12:34:12
Thank you so much give me the strength to keep going!for your lovely words!You