The Gate Keepers:3

Eyes closed better to hear , the gatekeeper watches as the shadows grow near.

Her nerves are steady and her heartbeat silent she knows there is much to fear.

The mists of time curl cold around her well placed feet

Honest is she  but she faces the dark and the shadows full of deceit.

Her sister sword in hand  defies all with flashing eyes she makes her stand.

With  the knowledge of all  she knows, every second will run as planned.

Suddenly across the void  a lonely bell begins to toll

Layer upon layer ,  life , time and legend will unfold.

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Jul 28, 2013 @ 00:24:45

    I like the thought that legend will unfold 🙂

    Great words… as always.


  2. penpusherpen
    Jul 29, 2013 @ 09:01:49

    definitely full of promise Sweet Willow. and living upto that promise too. hugs aplenty xPenx


  3. Bastet
    Jul 29, 2013 @ 12:41:42

    Wonderful…an epic series! Love what I’m reading.


  4. Morgan
    Jul 29, 2013 @ 21:13:23

    Very Nice….and lovely images. I need to go back and read more!


  5. saminaiqbal27
    Jul 31, 2013 @ 05:29:38

    I am so enjoying this gatekeepers epic stories. Keep writing and you will find happiness and peace in it. Best wishes.


    • willowdot21
      Jul 31, 2013 @ 08:38:22

      I am so glad that you are enjoying this saga. It is no easy aving to find hidden time to blog and read and comment and WordPress playing up and as good as blocking a huge swath of UK users, me included 😉 it is tedious and frustrating but I shall persist. I hope you are are well and happy hugs xxxxxx xx


      • saminaiqbal27
        Jul 31, 2013 @ 09:52:14

        Thanks for being so brave and courageous. I have all my best wishes and prayers for you. Heat gets to me these days and I become lazy. I love your stories these to me are true literature. Keep at it and it will bring you glory. Right now is a struggle time but you are doing very well. I am we’ll and happy. Take care my friend.

      • willowdot21
        Aug 02, 2013 @ 12:34:12

        Thank you so much give me the strength to keep going!for your lovely words!You

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