Everyday you pass my door
Everyday the same as the one before.
You never, ever look my way
Never catch the words I say.
So as I cannot make you look my way
My patience is spent so here is what I have to say!
“By all the star dust in the universal skies
May I soon be the apple of your eyes.
By all the bubbles in the sea
May you desert all others and have eyes alone for me!
By the every note the song Thrush sings
May I be the one who gives your emotions wings.
By everything that is good,beautiful and true
May you finally realize that I am the one for you!
I promise I shall from this day on look after you
There is nothing at all that you can do.
We shall always be together as happy lovers should be
Together, just us for eternity!
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The above poem was inspired by the Thursday Prompt at http://becausewerepoets.wordpress.com/category/poetry-prompts/
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Jun 06, 2013 @ 22:25:14
well done Willow… I’m glad you tried the prompt…
Jun 06, 2013 @ 22:26:48
Thank you I enjoyed that and I must try them more often!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 05:10:59
Awesome poem!!!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 06:40:03
thank you 🙂 xx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 08:17:18
OOoo, Loving this spellbinding poem , Sweet Willow, but will all go to plan?… and for eternity…(which reminds me, thank Dr Vlad for his personal visits, 🙂 abundant gratitude… xx) hugs aplenty xPenx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 10:51:36
Thanks I am pleased you like the spell, you being ofay with them. I am not sure our witch is too wise, perhaps she is young. I hope she will grow with time and consider the meaning of forever! Dr Vlad say he was glad to be of help , he was bored this morning so he donned his Genie hat and shot off looking for a lamp, you should see what he has done to my cupboards!!Have you seen my sound cloud at the side of my page I have put up two of my poems read by me… not sure if I like my voice, the newest one is “The end of days.” Have a good one Pen, hope the couch is on it’s way out. Hugs eternal. xxx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 11:30:27
Well written, emotive, inspiring and generating images in the mind x
Jun 07, 2013 @ 11:36:55
Thank you;)
Jun 07, 2013 @ 17:48:46
Spellbinding! Bewitching! Magical 🙂
Jun 07, 2013 @ 18:09:36
🙂 abracadabra! xxxxx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 19:36:52
Abracadee, I’ve got a brain the size of a flee!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 19:38:26
Doh! that is not true! 😉 xx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 19:44:02
It is because I’m pickling it in Guinness and I might just write a poem soon xxxx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:02:01
ewe that would be novel!!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:04:09
throw me a line, willow, I remember the spanner line you gave me ages ago ha ha 🙂 xx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:07:24
The Song Thrush took off up into the blue sky
I wonder where it is, that she is rushing to and why
😉 xxx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:09:03
Ooooh like it, ta and off I go to write 🙂 xxx But remember I am ever so slightly tipsy 😉
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:12:30
That is when you do your best work!!xxxxx 😉
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:13:31
😉 xxx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:17:43
😉 🙂 😉 🙂
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:18:23
I’ll see what my tipsy brain can come up with 😉 xx
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:21:23
That is the idea!, and just to make it more exciting here is the last line. ” She was beauty , she was not care. Not one soul know exactly why she was there.”
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:26:38
You do remember I am getting more and more tipsy as the minites ticj by 🙂
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:34:08
well get tapping on those keys!!!!!!!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:35:59
nearly done 🙂
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:45:32
and about time too!!
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:46:16
Done 🙂 http://agapintheclouds.wordpress.com/2013/06/07/song-thrush/
Jun 07, 2013 @ 20:46:51
can;t wait to see it!!