The horizon is falling in, I run as fast as I can but still it catches me.
The water is rising I am fighting for my life as I am tossed on this sea.
All my hopes are lashed to a horse that will never tire
A beautiful horse midnight black fast as the wind with eyes like fire.
The roses bloom around me alas they are devoid of colour
The water smells rancid and my skin has taken on a grey pallor.
I am striving to survive but I am sinking in the mire
Just when all seems lost the sun brakes through and sets the world on fire.
The horizon crashes to a halt as sunshine warms the land
The flowers take on rainbow hues as if painted by some divine hand.
I feel as if the ice in my heart has begun to melt
A peace is coming over me , a peace that I have never felt.
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:06:48
This is absolutely Beautiful!
one feels the rollercoaster and then the calm
I really like this one Willow…(well I always like your thoughts, but this is my day today)
Take Care…
)0(
ladyblue
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:28:46
Thank you I am so pleased that you also like this post, thank you I am every grateful for your support! xxxx
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:08:34
I love your “My Space” …
it seeps into my thoughts for it says so much…
)0(
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:27:29
Thank you I am so glad that you like the poem. I wrote in when I was in a very dark place, I intend to change it every fortnight for another poem.xxxxx
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:29:50
I think it will touch more than you will know Willow…
it is beautuful…haunting…I Love it
)0(
Jun 03, 2013 @ 22:32:29
Thank you, thank you.
Jun 04, 2013 @ 01:30:30
Beautiful
The song made it better…
Jun 04, 2013 @ 05:04:48
😉 you can’t better a bit of Bowie xx
Jun 04, 2013 @ 05:26:48
Bowie’s older stuff was good…
I am a bit young to remember most of it.
But I caught up..
Saying that I don’t know if I was too young or just playing fitba lol
Jun 04, 2013 @ 06:03:16
Well I remember Bowie as I am of an age with him ( he being at least 6yrs my senior) I loved his music he was new fresh and weird!! But I have to say that this new version is far superior to the original…. now watch all the Bowie purists will be screaming sacrilege !! 😉 xx
Jun 04, 2013 @ 06:32:20
ha ha ha I bet…
I think each to their own..
I liked “All for one” He did with Rod Steward and Bryan Adams. But I do have man love for Bryan Adams..
Should I call someone about this?
lol
Jun 04, 2013 @ 06:40:52
Definitely I am seriously worried about this!! I have a great video here for you , It is a little odd to start with, well very odd but stick with it and it is amazing ! Do you remember Jeff Beck, one of my first live gigs brilliant memories!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnOmrDzRrGQ have to go for my exercise now I have an assessment at the gym tomorrow and I want my PT to be pleased with my progress…it hurts but shit everything hurts so up and at ’em!! 😉 xx
Jun 04, 2013 @ 07:25:28
Watching…
And no pain, no gain..
x
Jun 05, 2013 @ 10:47:16
Wonderful wording, Willow, and ending in such hoped for peace.. hugs aplenty xPenx
Jun 05, 2013 @ 12:37:55
Thank you Pen , we all need hope!! hugs eternal!!
Jun 06, 2013 @ 01:41:37
Very rich, such a lovely transformation!
Jun 06, 2013 @ 09:06:38
Thank you I am glad you liked it!