New Life

Sunshine through the window touches on her hair She is a beauty, a pale faced red head, fair beyond compare. In front of her a vase of flowers  filled with classic blooms arranged with love Concealed with the bright petals her avian friends hides He is attracted by the petals hues which he had spotted as he flew above. He has no idea how much this bouquet  means what importance on it rides.   The woman is unhappy she does not know what to do. The flowers are from her man Who has deceived her, they are a request for forgiveness. Sadly she doubts she can. He’s let her down one time too many, taken her love and not returned her any. A cloud crosses the sun casting a shadow on the flowers,her gentle bird flies away. Seizing  the vase she rushes to the bin, life has finally dropped the waiting penny. Alighting gracefully in his cage her bird begins to sing, The woman smiles as at long last she  decides he too will be cast away With the flowers. And her new life can begin.

16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. penpusherpen
    May 07, 2013 @ 21:52:27

    and a new life begins,…. lovely poem Sweet Willow, fitting perfectly with the picture,.. and I love the thought of casting him out with the flowers, the bin is the best place methinks… hugs aplenty … xPenx

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    • willowdot21
      May 08, 2013 @ 11:07:40

      Yes out with the old and in with the new! I hope the bird is safe!! I hope having you are having a good day! Hugs eternal!! xx

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      • penpusherpen
        May 08, 2013 @ 11:10:49

        not bad,.. Willow, couldn’t sleep last night tho’… so sat composing a poem… Too many thoughts abound… Hope you’re fine ‘n dandy my friend. hugs aplenty.. xxx

      • willowdot21
        May 08, 2013 @ 11:56:59

        I empathize with you not being able to sleep, never a good time to write, as you say too many thoughts abound, they beat you down!! I am as I always am, plodding forward!! Hugs eternal back at ya!!

  2. Eric Alagan
    May 08, 2013 @ 00:19:29

    Always good to start with a clean sheet – and hopefully write a new tale of true love 🙂

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  3. I HAVE A VOICE
    May 08, 2013 @ 01:10:03

    I can feel her wounded spirit ~ great language use!

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  4. Blink
    May 08, 2013 @ 06:20:08

    beautiful write up that made me dream of one of my favurite scenes 😛

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  5. tazeinmirzasaad
    May 08, 2013 @ 14:34:00

    My dear friend, I have nominated you for The Very Inspiring Blogger Award! Congratulations! Please visit this link: transcendingbordersblog.wordpress.com/2013/05/08/very-inspiring-blogger-award/

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  6. Gray Dawster
    May 11, 2013 @ 09:20:25

    A truly wonderful piece of your writing is offered here Willowdot and I have enjoyed reading it, indeed all of what I have read today is quality writing, as it is always with your fine scripting 🙂 🙂

    Andro xxxx

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