Day 18 NaPoWriMo : Today’s prompt is to write a poem that begins and ends with the same word. Not easy so here goes!
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Respect
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Respect the boys demand,
Bling dripping from neck and hand.
Acting like gangsters pushing everyone around
Out your mouth you make Jamaican sound.
Big man, you think you are
Driving round in your customed car.
Running with the gang hanging with the girls
Your prospect disapearing like swine before pearls.
Harassing the nervous and the older folk
Littering the place with needles, skank and coke.
Never mind the children playing by the swings
They don’t know about needle sticks, aids and things
Peddling drugs and using kids on bikes as runners
Making rules for gangs, becoming knifers and gunners!
Starting young and never growing old
Ending up dead in a pool of blood on the pavement cold.
Mother grieving, says he was a good son
She don’t know the half of what he’s done.
Black hearse carries the boy, all his friends stand and reflect
On his coffin a single wreath spells the one word, Respect.
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Apr 18, 2013 @ 16:45:34
Reblogged this on Grand and Humble and commented:
Complacency. Dauntless.
I liked the story very much, showing virtues both grand and humble.
Apr 18, 2013 @ 16:50:11
Thank you I am pleased you like the poem and I am grateful for the reblog. 🙂
Apr 18, 2013 @ 16:49:15
Fantastic! I like the connection from beginning to end, the journey right through of the life – and death. and your clarity and satire. The last line sent a shiver through me.
Apr 18, 2013 @ 17:00:06
Thank you I am glad you liked it , did write a small story on the subject with more detail , this poem was almost like a synopses . 🙂
Apr 18, 2013 @ 20:26:06
Nice job beginning and ending with ‘respect’ and you told a powerful story as well. Perfection!
Apr 19, 2013 @ 10:54:47
Thank you it is a almost rap! 😉 xx
Apr 18, 2013 @ 22:55:18
An excellent and thorough story in short, poetic form. Delightful.
Apr 19, 2013 @ 10:54:06
Thanks that was my plan, so glad you like it! 😉
Apr 19, 2013 @ 13:52:33
You said it, Sweet Willow, respect is earned not asked for… and you told it like it is, the whole picture painted so well by your words…. hugs aplenty… xPenx
Apr 19, 2013 @ 13:56:24
Thank you Pen, it is a sad truth oft repeated these days. I did write a three part story on this subject last year.
Apr 19, 2013 @ 21:36:01
Respect isnot really earned but, when given it needs to be taken as a privilege ~excellent writing !
Apr 19, 2013 @ 21:41:45
I agree thank you for reading. xxx
Apr 20, 2013 @ 09:17:34
Excellent again Willow. You are SO flowing these days – just excellent. I like how you rhyme, & I agree: just about rapping 🙂
Apr 20, 2013 @ 09:42:18
It was much harder to write a rap than I thought it is all about the sound of the words and the timing!Not bad for a first attempt!
Apr 20, 2013 @ 12:20:51
Have you added this one before Willowdot I seem to remember it, but either way It’s a very good poem 🙂 Have a fun weekend and be good, if you like I mean? 😉 lol xxx
Apr 20, 2013 @ 13:14:22
You have an excellently wicked memory Andro. I wrote a three part story with the same theme! This has taught me you can write a story long or you can write it short but you must write it well!! Big naughty hugs to you!!xxx
Apr 20, 2013 @ 13:24:29
And you have written it well my sweet friend 🙂 🙂 Have a deliciously exquisite rest of day and treat yourself to something yummy 🙂 xxx
Apr 20, 2013 @ 13:37:52
😉