Father

 

I wrote this little tribute to new Fathers all over the world. I was inspired by Eric Alagan and his 55 word flash fiction you should go and see his poem Father here  .

 

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Father

His hands are too big,
Like his heart and the love he has to give .
His fear is tangible but he holds the baby
His own his son a leader of men …maybe.
This life these eyes dependent on him
My boy my lad his heart begins to sing.
She just smiles as she watches.

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Eric Alagan
    Apr 14, 2013 @ 10:02:35

    Willow dear,

    As I mentioned earlier – so beautiful and all the more that I know the back story in your life that birthed these words.

    Peace and blessings,
    Eric

    Reply

  2. penpusherpen
    Apr 14, 2013 @ 11:55:31

    a fathers love and hopes describes perfectly. Sweet Willow.. xx Pen xx

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  3. Angela
    Apr 14, 2013 @ 13:55:39

    So tender, Willow. Gorgeous!

    Reply

  4. davebarclay1954
    Apr 15, 2013 @ 14:52:43

    Hope you don’t mind but I’ve reblogged this as its so poignant

    Reply

  5. Will of Heart
    Apr 22, 2013 @ 22:16:05

    this poem touch me, it made me missed my father…

    Reply

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