This is a poem I wrote last Easter, I just wanted to give it a rework and then post it anew. 


Help me father I need you. I am left here alone frightened and so far from home.

Peace be with you, peace be with me. Help me father can you not set me free.

I am alone here in Gethsemane this beautiful garden where I have often rested.

They are coming for me soon father and I shall be arrested.

What can I say father what must I do I am so frightened and scared please may I have a word from you.

Can you not take this bitter cup away from me.

I do not want to be whipped and crucified, I do not want to be questioned and disbelieved.

OH! Father I am scared help me pleased or would that make you too aggrieved.

OH! Father they will drag me through the streets they will laugh at me, my disciples  will all deny me.

Father are you there have you denied me , speak father I do not hear you, give me sign you are there father, let me see.

I am so tired father I have done all you have asked of me.

I sat and broke bread with them and told them the message that they have to spread.

They will have to do it now in my name as I will be dead.

I hear them coming any second  Judas will give me a kiss

OH! Please father let me give it all a miss.


Oh! okay I finally understand

the holy dove is here to hold my hand .

I shall do my part I shall do my best.

I shall full fill every part of your request.

Thy will be done, thy will be mine.

I shall do my best father I shall shine.

Just stay with me father stay with me please

I am so scared I am weak at the knees

…OH! no here comes Peter he will try to stand up for me

I do not want him mixed up in this bit with me.

Okay I am ready I think I can stand

thank you father for sending the dove to be at my right hand.

You are looking for Jesus of Nazareth ………….. I am he.

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Wendell A. Brown
    Mar 28, 2013 @ 22:29:34

    Beautiful poem, my sister! God Bless!


  2. prayingforoneday
    Mar 29, 2013 @ 04:39:39

    As someone walking the path to God and learning as much as I can, thank you for sharing this. Every little I read helps me understand more.
    I hope that makes sense.

    Shaun x


    • willowdot21
      Mar 29, 2013 @ 20:36:08

      I am glad that this post helped you to make some sense of the night before the crucifixion , just remember it is only my interpretation of events.


      • prayingforoneday
        Mar 29, 2013 @ 20:51:41

        Yeah I am learning each of our interpretations is important. What you take from the message in a way.

        Thank you.

      • willowdot21
        Mar 29, 2013 @ 20:56:14

        I think as he was just a man he would of been so scared! Terrified he knew what was coming and he had to believe so much in the being that he referred to as his father.

      • prayingforoneday
        Mar 29, 2013 @ 23:02:38

        Yeah. I spoke to a few Bishops and others about Passion of the Christ, Mel Gibson Movie, no names, some agreed the film was accurate, some said it was not. I don;t know.. But yeah, he was a man, he must have been scared and in pain, even knowing

      • willowdot21
        Mar 30, 2013 @ 19:32:17

        Yes if was like that his pain would of been unbelievable

      • prayingforoneday
        Mar 30, 2013 @ 19:56:41

        As you said, any other man’s, maybe worse. Knowing what he knew. And what it meant to be killed by “Man”.. I am still learning and walking. I am getting there. So thank you..Truly x

  3. Eric Alagan
    Mar 29, 2013 @ 04:49:09

    As an ordinary and simple father – I tell you, this is so heart wrenching.

    Peace and blessings, Eric


  4. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Mar 31, 2013 @ 12:40:41

    Wow, Willow, I can’t imagine what you needed to rework. Lovely.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

Follow me on Twitter

Follow Us

Follow Us

Follow Us

Follow Us

365 And Counting

there's plenty more where the first year came from

Ruth Blogs Here

Or not, depending on my mood

Mina's Articles

Writing about all articles that might represent our life such Poetry, Lifestyle, Employment, Education and Investment

A Prolific Potpourri...

The Artistic Endeavors and Musings of Matt Snyder

France & Vincent

Writing Magic, Myth and Mystery

Sun in Gemini

SteveTanham - writing, mysticism, photography, poetry, friends

But I Smile Anyway...

Musings and memories, words and wisdom... of a working family woman



Hot Dogs and Marmalade

Salty like hot dogs (and tears). Sweet like marmalade (and life).

Two on a Rant

Rants, humor, sarcasm, and a haiku-like substance? It's hard to know what's going to come out of our minds next.


An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart

Trent's World (the Blog)

Random Ramblings and Reviews from Trent P. McDonald

Shelley Wilson Author

Multi-Genre Author of YA Fantasy and Non-Fiction Self-Help

Marsha Ingrao - Always Write

Having fun blogging with friends


Learner at Love

Chel Owens

A Wife, My Verse, and Every Little Thing

Mr. Ohh!'s Sideways View

For those of you who aren't me...and I've noticed a surprisingly large number of people who aren't.

The Small Dog

Life from the Tail End


DOG TAILS by ZoZo and Jools


poetry and short stories

Ben Naga

Gifts from the Musey Lady and Me. "Laissez-moi vous raconter ma vraie histoire."

About the Jez of It

Poetry, stories and strange odds and ends from the desk of a writer

The Sound of One Hand Typing

Music, Musings, Memoir, and Madness

"LIFE" ( You like it, I love it! )

"LOVE"-Keeping it real, and keeping it simple!

Our Eyes Open

Come along on an adventure with us!

Diary of a Dublin Housewife

Diary of a Dublin Housewife

J-Dubs Grin and Bear It

As Always, More to Come

Smorgasbord Blog Magazine

Blog magazine for lovers of health, food, books, music, humour and life in general

Colline's Blog

a potpourri of thoughts and experiences

lynz real cooking

lynz real life


Musings about Havenverse

Sue Vincent's Daily Echo

Echoes of Life, Love and Laughter

like mercury colliding...

...moments of unexpected clarity

%d bloggers like this: