The Final Act

This is the final concert the last and final act! You will not be leaving here dears with your bodies or souls intact!

OMG they they were fucking epic this closing act they took the audience  in their hands and squeezed the life out of them just like a tiny cat.

No one could quite believe what they all saw with their eyes the girl she was on fire (smoldering) and he covered in maggots and flies.

But the music held them it lulled them into trust , sadly that is where it all fell apart as their souls were turned to dust.

Something in the music turned them all mad if it had not been such a free for all you might of thought it sad. It was nothing more than an orgy couples at it everywhere naked arses and boobs abounding everywhere. As the music grew louder orgasmic cries could be heard the crowed could not get enough of each other” YES YES ” was all that could be heard.

As the music got even louder and blood began to flow from their noses and their ears  and between their lips, why, we will never now. They all began to drink the blood they loved the bitter metallic taste , they sucked it from each other, the lapped it from the floor  not a drop went to waste. The howls rose up loud and clear for  MORE, MORE, MORE!!!

Death and his daughter Apathy performed their fatal act, louder, louder their music rose and the walls began to crack! The floor beneath the audience suddenly gave way. Not surprising it could not take all the shagging that took place that day! The ceiling started falling as the crowed fell down to hell and Satan and hoards stoked up the fires  and greased their wrack’s and shout “Thanks Death that went well!!”

So Death turned to his daughter Apathy, he grinned at this spectre that he loved so very well and said to” Okay Sweetie we gave them merry hell!!  ”

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. abichica
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 02:04:32

    wow! your work always has so much power, so much! 🙂


  2. gigoid
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 03:52:08

    Hmm…. as Spock would say, “fascinating”. Just reading the tags got me here to read it, and I hit the button above, but, I’m not sure Like is the correct term… it’s interesting, and powerful, but, probably because of my own inner turmoil, I’m not a big horror or graphic sex & violence fan…. A new style for you, my dear?….


    • willowdot21
      Mar 06, 2013 @ 13:10:01

      I am not overly into this sort of poem but just once in awhile I get this itch that needs to be scratched to get the venom out. I did write a whole series of thirteen chapters called Armageddon. I have also been known to write the erotic and erotic Gothic poems not to mention Vampire blood lust….. Na little mouse has a her dark side too.
      That said I wish I could help ease your inner pain! Be blessed and happy! xxxxxxxxx


  3. kate58
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 09:06:49

    Wow, we WERE thinking along the same lines! 🙂


  4. Gray Dawster
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 15:17:13

    This is a change of pace for you Willow but you have told this one well, or should that be wickedly well? 🙂 I like your style my great friend 🙂 Have a lovely rest of day and a wonderful evening also 😉 xxx


    • willowdot21
      Mar 06, 2013 @ 20:25:16

      Not too much of a departure from the norm for me. I wrote a thirteen part series called Armageddon and I have written erotic poems and Gothic poems! But this one did vent some spleen!


      • Gray Dawster
        Mar 06, 2013 @ 21:49:21

        That just proves how little I have spent here on your Space and I do hope to change that now that I have returned.

        You have a very nice rest of evening Willow and keep writing as you are so good at it my great friend 🙂 🙂 xxx

      • willowdot21
        Mar 06, 2013 @ 22:18:12

        Thank you Andro , may I still call you that, Sir Knight. You give strength to write more. I hope you will visit often. I hope you have a wonderfully chivalrous evening and have a gallant day ahead of you!I give you my favour to carry into battle. 😉 😉 XXX

      • Gray Dawster
        Mar 06, 2013 @ 22:28:32

        Thank you I will tie that to my lance 🙂 Of course you may call me Andro everyone else does and yes do keep adding to your Space I always have liked how you wrote in verse 🙂 xxx

      • willowdot21
        Mar 06, 2013 @ 22:40:55

        You know I like to write in verse, and yet sometimes it can be a curse! 😉 😉

  5. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Mar 07, 2013 @ 00:56:49

    oh I do like this one Willow!
    very well done !


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