Moonlight Haiku

21 Feb 2013 16 Comments

by willowdot21 in Uncategorized Tags: flight, HAIKU, moon, moonbeams, night, Silver, Stars, wishes

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Oh! the silver moonlight sparkles

Softly breathes the moaning sea begging release .

Flame red her hair shimmers.

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Weeping in the moonlight on the shore

Silver beams catch her beauty

Will her socks be wet for evermore.

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Violin notes climbing strident upward

Climb on the breeze riding the night .

Escaping hopes ascending sweetly into endless flight.

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Beautiful in the moon’s light

Wondering out into the night Earth calling

Watching silver wishes falling such amazing sight!

16 Comments (+add yours?)

writingthebody
Feb 21, 2013 @ 21:45:56

Love short poems…..wish I could write them. Small typo the line about socks (I do that all the time myself) – thank you for the combo of images and poetry too..

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- willowdot21
  Feb 21, 2013 @ 21:53:03
  
  Thanks for spotting the typo I read that three times and still missed it!! I am glad you like the Haikus ..they are not always spot on but I try. XX 😉
  
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  - writingthebody
    Feb 21, 2013 @ 22:31:01
    
    🙂
  - willowdot21
    Feb 22, 2013 @ 21:12:48
    
    😉
abichica
Feb 21, 2013 @ 21:57:02

this is awesome Willow.. you write beautifully.. 🙂

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- willowdot21
  Feb 21, 2013 @ 21:58:19
  
  Thank you I am pleased you like these little offerings. xx 😉
  
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Wendell A. Brown
Feb 21, 2013 @ 23:15:18

Your words and images so very beautiful! Thanks for sharing!!!!

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- willowdot21
  Feb 22, 2013 @ 21:12:23
  
  IT IS MY PLEASURE AND ALWAYS A SURPRISE THAT PEOPLE LIKE MY WORK. THANK YOU .XXXX
  
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eof737
Feb 22, 2013 @ 02:55:27

Hi Willowdot! I love the new look of your template… Stunning… Your poems are beautiful as always… BTW, the plural for haiku is haiku.. 🙂

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- willowdot21
  Feb 22, 2013 @ 21:10:41
  
  I am glad you like the new template . Thank you for the tip on the plural of Haiku , I am grateful ! 🙂 xx
  
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zumpoems
Feb 22, 2013 @ 14:16:18

Beautiful, musical set of Haikus. The accompanying art is such so warm and summer-night-like.

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- willowdot21
  Feb 22, 2013 @ 19:29:44
  
  Thank you I enjoyed doing them
  
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WordsFallFromMyEyes
Feb 23, 2013 @ 08:52:58

You’re so good at this, Willow – love the rhythm, the words themselves – let alone those pictures. That deviantart.com are pretty good.

It feels so good, doesn’t it, to write…

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- willowdot21
  Feb 23, 2013 @ 09:24:11
  
  I love to write no I live to write God knows it’s saved my life and my sanity. Oh the deviant art is wonderful. I love words. Hugs to you both xxxx
  
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zendictive
Feb 23, 2013 @ 13:48:26

I like Haiku’s (~_~) and I love these…
they are more mystical than reality notes
whimsical

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- willowdot21
  Feb 23, 2013 @ 15:08:58
  
  Thank you Art glad you like them.
  
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