A wall so high.

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We sit together, in two separate corners of the room. Once we were so close how did we come this far apart  it all happened so soon.

It all happened so soon, do I disgust you as much as you do me. What clouded our love how can this be. We eat together but our souls are so far apart we smile and chat  but we each are falling apart.

Falling apart deep cracks through our hearts. When did we stop loving what brought it all on, did we wake up one morning to find the caring had gone.

The caring had gone but the pretence lives on.We play out our lives all smiles , teeth and eyes hiding the truth covering up the lies. What is the reason where is the point .

What is the reason where is the point . Where has our reason gone that made us joint. So many years just flowing down the sink my words fall on your ears and dry faster than ink. There is an atmosphere that you could cut with a knife it is choking our relationship denying it life. We sit together, in two separate corners of the room. Once we were so close how did we come this far apart  it all happened so soon.

I have tried to reach you but you no longer care and I am beginning to wander if you are really there . So tall is the divide how high it has climbed I can no longer reach you and I am no longer inclined . It hurts too much.

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16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 20:02:25

    so sad
    but a reality n most peoples lives today
    Take Care…


  2. jasmindamaro
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 20:48:51

    hallo liebe willow wieder mal etwas gutes geschrieben gute nacht von jasmin


  3. rumpydog
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 23:38:07

    It is sad but this happens for many loving relationships. Great poem.


  4. Geoff
    Jan 21, 2013 @ 20:25:56

    Life can sometimes
    bite rather hard Willow 😦
    I hope that you are
    having a nice start to
    your week and keeping
    warm too 🙂 Freezing
    weather here Willow 😦

    Geoff xxx


    • willowdot21
      Jan 21, 2013 @ 21:32:10

      Life is a bitch or is it a bite? Freezing here too. Well what else can I expect have a wicked week. Cc


      • Geoff
        Jan 21, 2013 @ 21:35:47

        I will have a wicked week
        if you will too Willow 🙂 🙂
        What you need is a nice
        hot drink, how does choco
        delight sound? 🙂

        The kettle is on, the choco is in the cup
        and as soon as it boils I will pour you one 🙂

        Geoff xxx

      • willowdot21
        Jan 22, 2013 @ 05:20:05

        Sadly I was not a happy bunny last night and had slunk off to bed before I saw your wickedly comforting offer ..maybe tonight? Today is another day …as they say! ;)xx

  5. Bookman1974
    Jan 22, 2013 @ 13:28:46

    I was going to write ‘so sad’, but sad’s been said before, so I’ll say instead ‘all best wishes Willow, here’s to a happier 2013!’


    • willowdot21
      Jan 22, 2013 @ 16:26:37

      How lovely to see you here, I really must email you! Thanks for the New Year wishes and I wish you all a very happy healthy and prosperous New Year .xxxxx


  6. zendictive
    Jan 22, 2013 @ 14:12:56

    the big bang theory…marriage brings them together then they explode and drift apart… those not in a grand fixed orbit, drift away (~_~)


  7. Will of Heart
    Jan 27, 2013 @ 11:53:47

    It reminds me of my past, sad but true…


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