The Crow Angel

She fell to earth without warning it was early and the sky was full of the colours of a new day’s dawning. She was freezing and had never felt so alone without her kin so far from home. Never had she felt this cold even though she was three millennia old.

She was weeping silently when she was approached by some crows, one, two ,three. Gentle sister why do you weep why are you here your eyes are wide and you smell of fear. Brothers and sisters I have been exiled from heaven and I do not know if I will ever be forgiven.

Sister, asked the largest crow what is your crime, that from heaven you have been told to go. With downcast eyes she replied I fell in love with one , to me forbidden then to conceal this fact I lied. Is it a sin to fall in love, asked the second crow, her slender neck inclined. We thought love came from up above we often see the humans kissing arms entwined .


OH! I don’t know what to do said the angel, her heart feeling as if it were rent in two.  The third crow, the smallest and the youngest asked her where is the one she loved . With her head in her hands she cried, he is banished too. He is gone, Lost to me I don’t know what to do.

The smallest crow sent forth a call which summoned their flock one and all.We can help you angel dear we will help you find your love have no fear.

Then the skies from far and wide were filled with black crows answering the littlest crows cries! For now I can relate no more as I am tired and my eyes are sore . I shall be back ere soon and tell you more.

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. mominalatif
    Nov 15, 2012 @ 22:10:26

    I had been missing out on reading your Blog, read all the recent new ones and all of them are wondrous! Loved the ‘armadeggon’ series of poems! You are a brilliant writer!
    Ps. I have been missing your views on my blog, visit soon! 🙂


    • willowdot21
      Nov 15, 2012 @ 22:31:16

      Hi there Momina thank you for your praise for which I am so grateful. I am so sorry for not visiting your blog. Armageddon took up a lot of my time plus the real world has been very demanding. I promise to visit ASAP sorry again 😉 xx


  2. Matrone Bell
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 03:01:02

    Wow! This was beautiful 😀


  3. eof737
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 09:02:00

    This is special and the photos are brilliant… Hope all is well.


    • willowdot21
      Nov 16, 2012 @ 09:11:05

      I am glad that you liked this post I will be writing part 2today I am not sure if it will be a two part story or a trilogy yet. Thank you for asking I am okay it is just the ups and downs of life we all sail on that said I do hope all is good with you too. Xx


  4. jasmindamaro
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 13:16:24

    liebe volle gruesse an dich liebe willow und einen schoenen tag und abend von jasmin damaro


  5. zendictive
    Nov 17, 2012 @ 16:07:22

    hooked me into another intriging tale


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