Angel Child

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Golden light fractals through the leaves. Dark brown of strong Oak in and out the trees breathe.

Motes of  dust dancing in and out, squirrels collecting nuts in a hurry here  about!

As she lays there among the leaves no one has missed her yet so far no one grieves.

She is tiny, she is small, oh! dear God she has hardly lived at all.

Like an angel lying there with tiny insects running through her hair dearly love teddy lying by her side she dropped him only when she died.

Shafts of dying daylight frame her face, of the the last face she saw there is no trace. Silent leaves begin to fall slowly slowly they cover all……………

 

 

16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. mominalatif
    Oct 04, 2012 @ 07:36:43

    wonderful!

    ‘As she lays there among the leaves no one has missed her yet so far no one grieves.’
    ^brilliant

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    • willowdot21
      Oct 04, 2012 @ 13:51:37

      Thank you, a sad subject but one that does happen .

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      • mominalatif
        Oct 04, 2012 @ 15:02:31

        true that!

      • willowdot21
        Oct 04, 2012 @ 15:27:11

        I find it so hard to comprehend that human can do this to human.We are a despicable breed. I wander if the veneer is scraped off how far we really have evolved from the creatures who first set foot on this earth!

      • mominalatif
        Oct 04, 2012 @ 20:58:12

        I think no one can understand human nature, it’s an endless discovery and too complicated!
        And deep down, I guess we are the same wild creatures. We are just piled with gloss this moment, like now we invent things to satisfy our desires rather than needs, we still eat but a more posh way makes it’s way out every other time… the layout has changed but the concept remains.

      • willowdot21
        Oct 04, 2012 @ 21:04:29

        Yes you are so right we have not travelled far from the start.

      • mominalatif
        Oct 05, 2012 @ 04:54:45

        it’s more like going around in circles. No matter how far we go we’ll end up at the start point

      • willowdot21
        Oct 05, 2012 @ 11:31:51

        Yes that is the spot on simmili, however hard we try we end up back in the beginning.

      • mominalatif
        Oct 05, 2012 @ 12:58:51

        exactly!
        Wow, I haven’t had a nice discussion in ages! I like you views! 😀

      • willowdot21
        Oct 05, 2012 @ 13:11:59

        I am so pleased to heard that as I have so enjoyed this discussion too! It is great to find someone who is not afraid to speak their mind..it has been a “circular ” discussion it is just a shame that it was about such a sad subject … but it would not of started had it not been for the sad subject! Keep well and safe. 😉 🙂

      • mominalatif
        Oct 05, 2012 @ 14:24:51

        True, it’s has been circular like our conclusion! 😛
        take care and keep visiting the blog, we might find some new topics to share our views about! 🙂 x

  2. willowdot21
    Oct 05, 2012 @ 14:30:58

    I certainly will be visiting your blog!! 😉

    Reply

  3. eof737
    Oct 08, 2012 @ 04:57:15

    I love the delicacy in the language… 😉

    Reply

  4. Mira Jay
    Oct 10, 2012 @ 20:48:37

    As usual the voice for the unheard…I’d like to thank you, I think on behalf of too many… it’s such a heart-breaking story 😥 but you’ve breathed it nicely…
    Love & Light

    Reply

  5. willowdot21
    Oct 10, 2012 @ 21:03:22

    Yes it is a sad subject but t must be faced…………..

    Reply

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