How far is dawn

How far is dawn where can it be , how far is dawn will it ever come to rescue me. I watch the horizon as it creeps this way leaving all behind it lost and destroyed as it races this way.

How far is dawn where is the brand new day, has it disappeared  has it slipped away. The moon has hidden behind a cloud. My ears are filled with pounding of my heart as it beats out loud.

How far is dawn, is there a glimmering of light will it ever come or am I harbouring false hope this endless night. The hour before dawn is the darkest I have been told but I was not prepared for this utter emptiness or the stretching hour and the cold.

How far is dawn will things come right will the time stop stretching and will there be an end to this longest night.



14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Genie
    Aug 30, 2012 @ 21:55:09

    As long as there is breath there is hope. Ride out the pain and suffering, it will change, all things are subject to change, including pain.
    A smile is just around the corner. 🙂


  2. stephenedwards425
    Aug 30, 2012 @ 22:31:55

    I love your writing…be encouraged!


  3. Mrs. Peacock
    Aug 31, 2012 @ 01:20:59

    I like this alot


  4. zendictive
    Sep 01, 2012 @ 13:30:26

    dawn, my faorite part of the day…
    loved your write (~_~)


  5. eof737
    Sep 02, 2012 @ 00:37:35

    As long as there is life, all things are possible. 🙂


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