Thinking out Loud/ 2

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Floating gently in the sea is all I want, just too be free. I don’t care what lurks beneath if it kills me it would be a relief.

I don’t need all this doom and gloom the way things are I may as well be on the moon.

I cannot run I cannot fly. I feel like a trapped bird with clipped wings so I cannot fly.

Never knowing which way things will go kindness, reason or will the insults will flow.

There are only so many egg shell you can tread before it messes with your head.

Version 1 was too personal

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Wendell A. Brown, aka. The Brown One Poet
    Aug 14, 2012 @ 18:41:40

    You are flesh and spirit for all of us the flesh passes away but the sprit leaves the body as your lasting breath into a new beginning! Embrace this for even the Lord told and showed that when he appeared it was with a spritual body that could do many things. And as he also told the thief on the cross next to him who was dying on the cross beside him…today you will surely be with me in heaven! The other thief could not and would not believe…and that surety was not given to him. You have know him all your life stop embracing your pain, embrade with your spirit, His spirit and embrace faith that His promise is ever true. Live and share the blessing that are alive in your heart and also the love you still have to share…you are alive and still can help perfect change in your brothers and sisters. I am with you in love each day, in prayer and in spirit ! Much love to you!


    • willowdot21
      Aug 14, 2012 @ 20:05:24

      I don’t know exactly what you are saying but I know that I am grateful for your support. I need to be stronger and not give to despair and self pity. Thank you for caring words.


  2. granbee
    Aug 14, 2012 @ 18:46:00

    May the peace represented by these wonderful peace lilies bloom afresh in your heart, dear lady!


  3. mountainmae
    Aug 14, 2012 @ 20:44:55

    I understand walking on eggshells- it is hard, the emotional guarding takes a toll. I hope you can find the place of calm within yourself and recognize words that cut you down are lies.


  4. zendictive
    Aug 14, 2012 @ 22:03:45

    “I am not and never will be a victim” from the movie …The Crow
    when you say, I feel down… the first two letters tell you where the problem lies, within your self and that is where reconstruction should start… the heeling begins within…



  5. Maryam
    Aug 15, 2012 @ 14:44:39

    I hope the bird will get its wings back soon…


  6. eof737
    Aug 15, 2012 @ 19:51:18

    Lilies are also strong blooms… Keep your head up… the bugs will soon dissipate. ;-0


  7. eof737
    Aug 15, 2012 @ 19:55:01



  8. becca givens
    Aug 16, 2012 @ 22:16:26

    May your journey through the storm find you in immeasurable peace. Many blessings ~~ becca


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