Twist of Fate

It would be a cruel twist of fate if I met you again at heaven’s gate. We were so close, so in love I thought you were an angel sent from heaven above. Then one day I awoke to fine you gone no note nor message to tell me what I had done wrong. The pain you left me in was just too great it laid me low worrying about your fate.

I lost my way I lost my mind the way you disappeared was just so unkind. I asked for help I begged for solace but it was denied me.I needed your arms I needed to to see your face! It felt like I had fallen so far from grace and I had landed in an unholy place!

How cruel would be the twist of fate should I meet you at heaven’s gate. How long have I to suffer and wait. I searched for you. I rang around I begged your friends but you had gone to ground. They have all ignored me, shut me out they slammed their doors, left me weeping in the street then anger forced me to scream and shout!

Where are you , where have you gone? Damn you it is not my fault I’ve done nothing wrong. I trawled the streets I scraped the bars I rode the trains and searched the cars.But you were no ware.   I didn’t wash, or comb my hair.I searched high and I searched low but where you were I did not know.

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I can’t go on I can’t survive without your love I do not want to be alive. I have had enough it is now to late ……………Now it would be a cruel twist of fate if I met you again at heaven’s gate. For because of what I have now done they will not let me in for I have committed a mortal sin!

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. granbee
    Jun 01, 2012 @ 19:05:46

    Oh, my goodness gracious, willowdot–you give me cold chills! You certainly have a huge gift for capturing the depths of despair in a human heart! Please tell me you would NEVER condemn yourself to Hades by such an act of final self-destruction!


    • willowdot21
      Jun 01, 2012 @ 19:07:41

      I promise you never never , I have edited the poem if you would take another look! But no I would never take my own life…been tempted yes but do so no never!


  2. rumpydog
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 01:26:36

    That is a cruel twist!


  3. jhasmoments
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 02:17:42

    Great title.. I like what you have written …. even though it’s sad, a little depressing, and… (smile Willowdot21)
    I hope all is good with you. 🙂 I missed reading your work 🙂
    Sending many many hugs your way… just in case you are out of stock…. 🙂 🙂 smile


  4. kate58
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 08:58:34

    What Granbee said. Much love to you, my friend. xx


  5. Linda Willows
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 13:07:25

    Oh I do love and understand this beautiful piece. The essence is the irony of the damage done by one, that just disappears, not understanding nor being accountable for the damage done, the lifetime scars. But I believe that there is accountability and all meet with Creator and Source, at gateway to “next”, We all will see that best is to leave it to God, Much love to you, Linda


  6. Genie
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 16:34:27

    Sad thing is I have known people who acted on those feelings that you capture so well.


  7. willowdot21
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 16:46:57

    Yes I know I have too life is not a pretty thing , it is mean and can be hard. But we must not give up Genie we must wade on through the mire!


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