I am yours to take

See me now, here I stand. I am the vision of life at your command. I am the stuff of your night I am your passion and your fight as your soul takes flight. I am the beauty that you need, green of eye and sweet breasts from which you feed.

Red of hair, red lips so lush mine is the body that in your dreams you  crush. I am beauty I am bold I am the body you long to behold. I can take you up higher than the clouds I can take you away from the crowds.

I come to you while you sleep I am the one you long to keep. You take of me every night you drink of me all my parts every inch of me you devour I arouse you through your sleeping hours.

When you awake you are alone. I can hear you gasp I hear you groan. If you only give your all to me I can set you free. Open up your soul to me I shall take it , take it all I shall suck it dry then into the the night I shall bear you high. Yes give of your soul to me I shall never set you free, but every nerve in you will burn, ecstasy will bring you an eternal high  I shall ride you, suck you dry.

sleep on

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Arjun Sharma
    Feb 01, 2012 @ 22:51:37

    loved it willowdot. very intense.


  2. Kelly Cautillo
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 04:41:59

    What a gorgeous picture! I want that hair!


  3. Vampire Weather
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 06:09:56

    Wow. This is…wow!

    You have nailed this style beautifully, and with a magic that is captivating! Bravo Willow! I quite enjoyed this!


  4. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 09:09:26

    Both pictures are great – stunning readhead, and the man – he is so deeply asleep.

    This was very intriguing, this proposition at the end, but so ugly to “suck it dry” and never be free. Very interesting 🙂


    • willowdot21
      Feb 02, 2012 @ 12:53:35

      The “it” referred to is The Soul. Being English I decided to leave the double entente in! So read as you will it is all in the mind. If you are after the red hair get in line behind Kelly and me!! 😀 Hope you and Daniel are well xxxxx


  5. giselzitrone
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 13:20:48

    Grossartiges Bild und sehr schön sinnlich geschrieben eine schöne Liebesgeschichte Grusse dich ganz lieb und ich wünsche dir einen schönen Nachmittag Herzlicher Gruss von mir Gislinde. http://zitroneblog.wordpress.com


  6. Martin Shone
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 13:41:58

    Amazing and just enough to keep the frost away. And you know, I wish I had hair like that too 😉


  7. granbee
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 17:50:00

    Whooo-oooo-eeee, Williowdot. You have been tweeting with Martin too much! Such a sensual and most effective narrative here today. Those last ones could be a warning, however. They could have a double meaning!


    • willowdot21
      Feb 02, 2012 @ 18:44:59

      I promise they were a warning the female with the read hair is a collector of souls! I did spot the double entente but I decided that you were all like me as pure as the driven snow!! xxxx


  8. Raven of Leyla
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 18:29:20

    Beautiful and lusty poem! And he is sleeping 😉
    I am a brunette but oh would I love such lovely red hair, she is gorgeous!!!


  9. Snowflakes
    Feb 02, 2012 @ 19:29:53

    pure sweet,

    lovely expression, thanks for sharing.



  10. zendictive
    Feb 03, 2012 @ 00:28:04

    superfabtabulously tantalizing (~_~)


  11. willofheart
    Feb 03, 2012 @ 00:46:56

    wow what a mind blowing piece, red hair and red lips very lovely….


  12. Androgoth
    Feb 05, 2012 @ 00:11:49

    How simply erotic of you my fine and wicked friend 🙂 😉
    And portrayed so delicately, yet naughty and wicked in
    the presentation…

    I think that I shall dream on a little
    more and savour the moment 🙂 🙂

    Androgoth XXx


    • willowdot21
      Feb 05, 2012 @ 09:14:29

      I am glad to see that this can be taken for what it is , at first I thought I dare not write like this then I thought , no I am an adult everyone on wordpress is an adult ( well I assume they are) so I wrote what I felt and yes it is naughty but I have tried not to use swear words though they have their place and if the poem necessitated their use I would not shy away. I started this blog to express myself, something I had never been encouraged to do ( keep your feelings to yourself touch) so now this is liberating! I should of done so years ago! Have a naughty week!xx


  13. Foster Drake
    Feb 05, 2012 @ 06:41:09

    My God…this is inspiring! Erotic and tantalizing! Incredible work, my dear



    • willowdot21
      Feb 05, 2012 @ 09:24:21

      Thank you I am pleased to meet you,I am glad you have visited my blog. I am new to this poetry blogging , not quiet a year yet. But it is so liberating.I shall be visiting your blog very soon.xx


  14. Donna Adams
    May 07, 2012 @ 18:30:10

    Amazingly intensely erotic and captivating…. I do have the red hair… not quite so vibrant… but…. this sooo describes me…. lol


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