
Alone at the rising of the suns
Alone on the edge awaiting the dawn here on the outer rim of Orion I watch the light arrive on Caprica with the morn. From here I see far beyond the horizon the endless night skies to where they reach down to frozen lands where endless snow flies.
I count the suns, one, two, three they light the pitch black but they will not light me. I quickly slip back into the cave I shall no longer walk under the suns until he returns, the one I crave.
He flies his ship around Io as he watches for ships from Jupiter below. I pray for his safe return for without him for me there is no life I know. I will him safe I will him the victor may his ship zoom and fly in hails of photons and skim through firestorms along the the event horizon I wave my fists at the climbing suns I beg them return him to me the loss I feel in my blood as it runs in my veins………… Return him I beg them please I scream or do I just implore in vain.
Dec 29, 2011 @ 03:55:52
An interesting glimpse at what longing for a love one might be like in the future, I like it willow, your imagination is superb even in the future
AZ
Dec 29, 2011 @ 06:48:58
Pain is pain no matter where or when and I so dream of travelling the universe..hey ho!! Happy 2012 xxxxx
Dec 29, 2011 @ 10:14:25
This is purely magnificent. Such fantasy and imagination in these lines. Gloriously said, Willow. I love it!
Dec 29, 2011 @ 14:32:55
Thank you I am so glad you like this it just plays in my head sometimes, the future I mean. xxxx
Dec 29, 2011 @ 12:00:18
Wünsche dir ein frohes gesundes Neue Jahr und grüsse ganz lieb Gislinde
Dec 29, 2011 @ 14:33:27
Ich möchte auch Ihnen alles was Sie wünschen sich im Jahr 2012 mit viel Liebe Willow
Dec 29, 2011 @ 12:40:11
amazing description of being, the future in us now.
Dec 29, 2011 @ 14:35:49
all is parallel all is possible. It all happening at once past and future all spinning around in a huge circle. I wish sometimes I could cross for a while.
Dec 30, 2011 @ 14:33:45
this is amazing it’s like I am travelling in there from out of now where to the universe with this piece…fantastic…
Dec 30, 2011 @ 20:30:05
I would love to be there to I always wanted to be a starship pilot I was born too soon. https://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2011/11/15/to-fly-a-star-fighter/ live long and prosper 😀 xx
Dec 30, 2011 @ 17:29:47
Nice change of pace into the sci-fi realm! Very nicely done!
Dec 30, 2011 @ 20:33:48
It is where my dreams and day dreams often take me maybe I should share more. thank you ! xx
Jan 01, 2012 @ 14:48:58
These are interesting poems. I’ve read several, along with your bridge-to-the-present-the-past Christmas posts, and you are doing interesting, creative work that has a lot of vitality.
Jan 01, 2012 @ 15:31:29
Thank you for your comments I shall be hopping over to have a look at your blog in a sec!