The snidy, sneaking skulkers

hiding in the dark

The snidy, sneaking skulkers are hiding in the dark. The are waiting out there for me, for to my regime I did not hark.

I was to busy kidding myself I was doing so well. So busy patting myself upon the back, their skunky stink to smell.

OH! how well you are doing , how hard you push yourself you have come such a long way , surely those painkillers could go back up on the shelf!

The snidy, sneaking skulkers are hiding in the dark. The are waiting out there for me for to my regime I did not hark.

My body hurts so much now, I keep being sick and I have fallen over twice now, where is my walking stick. The snidy, sneaky skulkers all begin to ball, ha ha look at her, pride cometh before a fall.

I shall have to take my pills now and pray for the best, I hope I can sleep tonight. God knows I need the rest. I thought that I could do this I really thought I could, I have only missed one dose that is not to say I should.  But the snidy, sneaking skulkers are hiding in the dark. The are waiting out there for me for to my regime I did not hark.

 

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vampire Weather
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 04:01:06

    A clever little work with an ominous feel. Hinted with humor but underlying a deeper distress it seems. A creative and smart work, as always Willow! You make me feel like my writing is boring sometimes with your beautifully creative wording! Thank you for the inspiration!

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  2. zendictive
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 14:04:00

    of spartan pride, go with a smile knowing you fought till your last breath… is my philosophy (~_~) powerful write willowdot

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  3. willowdot21
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 14:05:32

    Vampireweather As I have just said on your blog, you writing is far from boring, you are a force of talent. Believe in yourself!!… Me I still have to see of the The Snidy, sneaking skulkers who are hiding in the dark!!

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  4. zumpoems
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 20:10:13

    Love that first line and the later repetition of it which functions as a framework. Great stuff.

    By the way, how do you get the snow to fall in the background?

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  5. willowdot21
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 20:22:11

    Thank you , email on it’s way about the snow!

    Reply

  6. catcherofstars
    Dec 08, 2011 @ 19:06:35

    Playful words, ominous undertone…..a deadly and perfect combination

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  7. willowdot21
    Dec 08, 2011 @ 20:00:28

    Thanks, you do need to watch out for them they catch you when you least expect them.

    Reply

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