Wednesday Poetry Challenge #6 November 30, 2011

Clenched

For this challenge  I have been asked to  provide a link to a page or post that references a poem on someone’s blog with commentary of my own — I beg all my my friends on here to bare with me I am sorry I have not picked you as wonderful as you all are!!

So I have picked  http://hollyannegetspoetic.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/clenched/   All of Holly’s work is quirky and intelligently amusing with a realistic twist on life.

Clenched is about a woman who is so uptight and wound up about herself. She is terrified and lonely. Every thing about her is designed to hurt others, keep others away. Attack is the best defence.She trusts no one and because of this she alienates all the people she meets.

It is a truly amazing poem and I shall leave you to judge for yourself!!

CLICK ON green Mr. Linky IMAGE BELOW:

1.  Click on green “Mister Linky” link above.

2. Enter the URL (address of your response to challenge not of your website’s home page) of your post or page that has your response to this challenge.

3. For this challenge, locate a poem on anyone’s blog, read carefully and provide a link to your page or post that references that poem (a link) and has your comments on that poem. You can read hundreds of poems before choosing!

4. Anyone that wishes to see responses can click on the Mister Linky link above to view links.

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7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. zendictive
    Dec 01, 2011 @ 15:26:56

    I want to do one of these challenges but they are so different from the norm, Now that NaNoWriMo is over maybe I’ll settle into doing one. Great write here…

    Reply

    • zumpoems
      Dec 01, 2011 @ 16:43:55

      zendictive,

      This would be a great challenge to start with as not very time consuming. Thanks for your comment that these challenges are different from the usual challenges one sees. I have a very ordered approach to making these work in concert to achieve general improvement in writing by those that take them — wait until you see the later challenges!

      Reply

    • willowdot21
      Dec 01, 2011 @ 20:02:07

      Do Join in, it is always very interesting!

      Reply

  2. zumpoems
    Dec 01, 2011 @ 16:41:23

    willowdot21,

    Thanks so much for linking to this poem. It is excellent! I had never visited that blog and enjoyed reading some of the earlier poems — thanks!

    Thanks for taking this challenge. (I clicked on Mr. Linky but it looks like you didn’t enter in your link to this page.)

    Reply

  3. willowdot21
    Dec 01, 2011 @ 20:04:09

    oops! what a idiot I am this week so far I have done nothing right this week!

    Reply

  4. hollyannegetspoetic
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 01:53:47

    Willow, I am truly flattered that you chose my page to focus on for this exercise. Thank you for thinking of me and your comments on my work. It is much appreciated, especially as (despite writing for years) I only began my blog a few months ago. xx

    Reply

  5. willowdot21
    Dec 02, 2011 @ 14:07:48

    You are very welcome and your talent is such that your blog is well deserving of lots of traffic! xxx

    Reply

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