I SHAKE AND SHUDDER AS YOU SET ME FREE

safe in my heart

Come dip under my skirts, hide here safe with me. Clamber up my body your hot hands touching my very soul. Senses I have denied so long, I shake and shudder as you set them free.

Yes come on to me I crave your company, let my gentle leaves caress you, and the lap of the nearby stream relax you let me press you, release your life’s love, pour it into me. I shake and shudder as you set me free.

Hide here with me no one shall see, run your hands and legs over me.Climb on top of me right to the top of my being. Look to the left and right tell me what you are seeing.I shake and shudder as you set me free.

Run your fingers along the length of my roots roll around on me push me gently you will bring forth my fruits. Straddle me, ride me, slide down me, push me. I shake and shudder as you set me free.

See the stars alight in the navy sky peeping through my fringe, let this night never end. You have my soul in your hand , on you I depend. Bury your face into me I am screaming in silence. OH! such joy. I shake and shudder as you set me free.I shake and shudder as you set me free.

I shudder and shake as you st me free.

I shake and shudder as you st me free.

11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Martin Shone
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 17:27:58

    Excellent, Willowdot21. Brilliant pace to it and rhythm too, stunningly seductive.

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    • willowdot21
      Nov 12, 2011 @ 18:45:27

      Thank you Martin that was my intention, never sure if I hit the mark with the seductive/ suggestive verse! It is a follow on from The Vampires shall not have you.

      Reply

  2. Martin Shone
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 19:35:06

    ooh have I read that one, I’ll have to check.

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  3. jillnottelten
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 21:19:21

    Beautifully done. I was just reading your comments back and forth with Martin and I agree with him. I think this one is better than your vampire one.

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  4. willowdot21
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 21:22:59

    Thanks Jill it just felt right , it seemed to run on from where the other one left off!

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  5. zumpoems
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 22:10:36

    What a wonderful tribute to the tree! I continue to see improvement in your writing as you keep getting better and better. This is so good and very natural from start to end — very nice touch in repeating the closing line.

    You have so much talent — when you take the time to tie up all loose ends and work you poems to the point they are smoooth, flowing and natural you produce work that is both excellent and widely accessible. Keep up the great work!

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  6. willowdot21
    Nov 12, 2011 @ 22:17:44

    Thank you, I am puzzled though, I just try to write what is pleasing to the ear . I am not used to praise so please forgive me if I am not good at accepting it.

    Reply

  7. kate58
    Nov 13, 2011 @ 08:16:25

    I used to climb trees as a child – much to the dismay of my parents, who felt it was not a suitable thing for a ‘yooung lady’ to do. Thanks for jogging such pleasant memories! 🙂

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  8. willowdot21
    Nov 13, 2011 @ 10:05:53

    I was never one for climbing trees so I envy you your memories . You must of awoken and invigorated many a sleeping Ent! xxxxxxx

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    • mamashakyhand
      Nov 15, 2011 @ 21:26:03

      This is quite beautiful willow! I caught the spirit of the tree, she spoke to me! Excellent! A joy to read. ❤

      Reply

  9. willowdot21
    Nov 15, 2011 @ 21:44:34

    Thank you , she is a beautiful spirit and only speaks to lovely people like you!x

    Reply

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